Love Something...

SFOSOK · Aug 28, 2006, 03:18 AM

Love Something...

So where do we start?
Was it where it began?
My Dear, I'm late, I'm sorry, I'm dead
Why do we return if we never left?

Is it that time again already, I was certain it had passed.
I was certain the dreams had fallen.
Why do you look at me as if I've stolen something?
I've only given my heart to those that would take it
And my soul to those that may keep it

Its a lost life, a neverending road.
God's smite, in a lost code.
Let them dance
Let them share
Let them love
Let them stare

Mysterious eyes and wandering cries have never been so close before.
Its a great plan, you have them fooled. The ones closest, the ones you lose.
Shut your mind, block it out. There should not be this much pain in doubt.
Its that thing that makes you rise, when all else fails. When your life is in ruins and you stand in the ashes. When your left with no hope, and you stare death in the eyes. When you can't fucking take it any longer, and you end it yourself.

This thing is still that one word
Love your God, your family, your friends, your girlfriend, your boyfriend, your wife, your anything, your everything.
Love something...

If you cannot love anything, at least love yourself...

-Kellenberger, Jonathan J.

Sorry if its a bit all over the place. I kinda just let my mind run free a bit lol. Too many thoughts at the moment but I like how it ended.

Falstaff · Aug 28, 2006, 04:09 AM

reminds me of disederata

mtsaint · Sep 1, 2006, 04:43 PM

life is the illusion and that's just not good enough. ever felt so good only to be brought back to reality by the daily news?

NAZ2222 · Sep 1, 2006, 07:09 PM

great poem!!!I really liked the too last parts!!!

SFOSOK · Sep 1, 2006, 09:38 PM

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Originally Posted by NAZ2222

great poem!!!I really liked the too last parts!!!

Thank you, my mind was thinking of too many things at once when I started but I do too agree that the ending is the best part.

Aug 28, 2006, 03:18 AM	#1
SFOSOK 939 Goin Strong Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario Posts: 7,033 Rep Power: 90 System Specs	Love Something... Love Something... So where do we start? Was it where it began? My Dear, I'm late, I'm sorry, I'm dead Why do we return if we never left? Is it that time again already, I was certain it had passed. I was certain the dreams had fallen. Why do you look at me as if I've stolen something? I've only given my heart to those that would take it And my soul to those that may keep it Its a lost life, a neverending road. God's smite, in a lost code. Let them dance Let them share Let them love Let them stare Mysterious eyes and wandering cries have never been so close before. Its a great plan, you have them fooled. The ones closest, the ones you lose. Shut your mind, block it out. There should not be this much pain in doubt. Its that thing that makes you rise, when all else fails. When your life is in ruins and you stand in the ashes. When your left with no hope, and you stare death in the eyes. When you can't fucking take it any longer, and you end it yourself. This thing is still that one word Love your God, your family, your friends, your girlfriend, your boyfriend, your wife, your anything, your everything. Love something... If you cannot love anything, at least love yourself... -Kellenberger, Jonathan J. Sorry if its a bit all over the place. I kinda just let my mind run free a bit lol. Too many thoughts at the moment but I like how it ended. __________________ Warning - Explicit Content Preceeding METAL!!

Aug 28, 2006, 04:09 AM	#2
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	reminds me of disederata __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Sep 1, 2006, 07:09 PM	#4
NAZ2222 HardwareHeaven Addict Join Date: May 2005 Location: Portugal Posts: 397 Rep Power: 0 System Specs	great poem!!!I really liked the too last parts!!! __________________ Why do we fall? So that we learn how to pick our self's up.

Sep 1, 2006, 04:43 PM	#3
mtsaint DriverHeaven Addict Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 257 Rep Power: 0	life is the illusion and that's just not good enough. ever felt so good only to be brought back to reality by the daily news?