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SFOSOK · Apr 11, 2007, 11:28 AM

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She looks at me with sadness in her eyes
What has been taken can never be replaced
Her choice was one of severed fate
Though this suffering I cannot hide
I take this weight in full stride

Her words, her touch they burrow deep
Into the soul with an outward reach
The thorns of love, they claw away
To destroy my heart soon this day

Odd it is this thing called love
To be thrown away like a stray dog
Kept for so long with no where to go
Back to his master he returns to know

How can something so long ago hurt so much?
The heart is shattered with just one touch
The pieces I am left to collect myself
And set this vase upon a shelf
In hopes to be dusted off one day
For it is this love I pray

-Kellenberger, Jonathan J.

GutterPunk · Apr 11, 2007, 11:40 AM

awww touching!

Falstaff · Apr 11, 2007, 01:08 PM

very good....
does the author have any other poetry?

SFOSOK · Apr 11, 2007, 08:17 PM

Yes though most of it was back in the days I liked to complain about pretty much everything.

Just wanted to get back into writing so I thought I would start with this. I'm glad you enjoy it though I have some better ones and hopefully some more to follow.

I should have seperated some of the ideas and branched off specific poems for each but I just figured I'd write and see how it came together.

Falstaff · Apr 11, 2007, 10:33 PM

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Originally Posted by SFOSOK

Yes though most of it was back in the days I liked to complain about pretty much everything.

Just wanted to get back into writing so I thought I would start with this. I'm glad you enjoy it though I have some better ones and hopefully some more to follow.

I should have seperated some of the ideas and branched off specific poems for each but I just figured I'd write and see how it came together.

you complain? who's been spreading these rumours?

Apr 11, 2007, 11:28 AM	#1
SFOSOK 939 Goin Strong Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario Posts: 7,033 Rep Power: 89 System Specs	-Untitled -Untitled She looks at me with sadness in her eyes What has been taken can never be replaced Her choice was one of severed fate Though this suffering I cannot hide I take this weight in full stride Her words, her touch they burrow deep Into the soul with an outward reach The thorns of love, they claw away To destroy my heart soon this day Odd it is this thing called love To be thrown away like a stray dog Kept for so long with no where to go Back to his master he returns to know How can something so long ago hurt so much? The heart is shattered with just one touch The pieces I am left to collect myself And set this vase upon a shelf In hopes to be dusted off one day For it is this love I pray -Kellenberger, Jonathan J. __________________ Warning - Explicit Content Preceeding METAL!! Last edited by SFOSOK; May 25, 2007 at 09:57 PM.

Apr 11, 2007, 11:40 AM	#2
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Apr 11, 2007, 01:08 PM	#3
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,047 Rep Power: 206	very good.... does the author have any other poetry? __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Apr 11, 2007, 08:17 PM	Thread Starter #4
SFOSOK 939 Goin Strong Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario Posts: 7,033 Rep Power: 89 System Specs	Yes though most of it was back in the days I liked to complain about pretty much everything. Just wanted to get back into writing so I thought I would start with this. I'm glad you enjoy it though I have some better ones and hopefully some more to follow. I should have seperated some of the ideas and branched off specific poems for each but I just figured I'd write and see how it came together. __________________ Warning - Explicit Content Preceeding METAL!!