While we walk

Esaz666 · Jun 25, 2007, 05:18 PM

While we walk,
nothing comes down like the rain,
inside the darkness terrifies.
A movement slow,
but perceivable helps us
through the mist.

As a dreamer wakes,
we slowly fall to our knees
and find ourselves alone.
In our aloneness we find solace.

While we walk,
our shadow follows,
like that shadow
our emptiness remains with us,
we become a desert.

In circles we run,
amongst standing stones,
slowly the veil falls away.
Until one day,
were born into being.

While we walk,
we see the trees again,
we feel the fallen leaves on our feet,
nature breathes.

The sun rises,
the deer cries,
her rivers are the veins, they flow.
Her powerful waters revive us
from our distance.

In remembrance we breath
with her again,
while we walk.

D.White 2007-06-25

Falstaff · Jun 28, 2007, 10:22 PM

I enjoy this kind of work, who is D White?

Esaz666 · Jun 29, 2007, 03:08 PM

its me!,

i wrote this a couple of days ago, i live in sheffield (UK) and was watching the rain come down to flood us, luckily my area was ok, it rained all day and all night and then the rivers started breaking their banks and stuff, it sounds a bit gloomy for me this one, it was the greyness rubbing off on my writing.

thanks for the feedback, its well appreciated.

Falstaff · Jun 29, 2007, 04:34 PM

Yeah, I do the Suffolk thing as well, bit gloomy really, but lots of material..as long as I stay away Ipswich..LOL

Jun 25, 2007, 05:18 PM	#1
Esaz666 BeardHeaven Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Uk,Earth,Universe,3rd dimention Posts: 298 Rep Power: 59	While we walk While we walk, nothing comes down like the rain, inside the darkness terrifies. A movement slow, but perceivable helps us through the mist. As a dreamer wakes, we slowly fall to our knees and find ourselves alone. In our aloneness we find solace. While we walk, our shadow follows, like that shadow our emptiness remains with us, we become a desert. In circles we run, amongst standing stones, slowly the veil falls away. Until one day, were born into being. While we walk, we see the trees again, we feel the fallen leaves on our feet, nature breathes. The sun rises, the deer cries, her rivers are the veins, they flow. Her powerful waters revive us from our distance. In remembrance we breath with her again, while we walk. D.White 2007-06-25 Last edited by Esaz666; Jun 29, 2007 at 03:14 PM.

Jun 28, 2007, 10:22 PM	#2
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	I enjoy this kind of work, who is D White? __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Jun 29, 2007, 04:34 PM	#4
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	Yeah, I do the Suffolk thing as well, bit gloomy really, but lots of material..as long as I stay away Ipswich..LOL __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Jun 29, 2007, 03:08 PM	Thread Starter #3
Esaz666 BeardHeaven Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Uk,Earth,Universe,3rd dimention Posts: 298 Rep Power: 59	its me!, i wrote this a couple of days ago, i live in sheffield (UK) and was watching the rain come down to flood us, luckily my area was ok, it rained all day and all night and then the rivers started breaking their banks and stuff, it sounds a bit gloomy for me this one, it was the greyness rubbing off on my writing. thanks for the feedback, its well appreciated.