One of these days

Esaz666 · Oct 11, 2007, 03:33 PM

One of these days,
your lucks gonna change,
all the pain, you'll find,
has left you far behind.

One of these days,
the suns gonna shine
on you,
like you know that it
should do.

One of these days,
the weight that you carry,
is gonna fall away,
listen to what i say.

Im telling you,
One of these days,
you'll find,
all good things come
through.

Im telling you,
One of these days,
all things must come,
through Love.

d.white
11 oct 2007

Falstaff · Oct 24, 2007, 07:02 AM

is this to any particuler song you had in your mind?

Esaz666 · Oct 24, 2007, 11:46 AM

its not a song yet, but
i only started writing poems through
song writing, so many of my writings
have a song like quality, they need a bit of work
to turn them either one way or the other.

i wrote this for friend who was having a bad time
with relationships and all that stuff, she seems allright last
time i saw her.

Falstaff · Oct 24, 2007, 08:29 PM

I kind of used to the same myself, till I could hold my hand on the frets, just strum now and then, but Yeah I agree, it is easier I suppose to use melody and chords to find your poetic truth.

Esaz666 · Nov 5, 2007, 08:26 PM

i think a lot of peotry is very musical and in its own way harmonious.

Its a great way to get inspiration going, just jamming away for a bit
on a guitar or something. I do it both ways, sometimes just paper other times with instruments or tracks allready recorded.

Oct 11, 2007, 03:33 PM	#1
Esaz666 BeardHeaven Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Uk,Earth,Universe,3rd dimention Posts: 298 Rep Power: 58	One of these days One of these days, your lucks gonna change, all the pain, you'll find, has left you far behind. One of these days, the suns gonna shine on you, like you know that it should do. One of these days, the weight that you carry, is gonna fall away, listen to what i say. Im telling you, One of these days, you'll find, all good things come through. Im telling you, One of these days, all things must come, through Love. d.white 11 oct 2007

Oct 24, 2007, 07:02 AM	#2
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,047 Rep Power: 206	is this to any particuler song you had in your mind? __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Oct 24, 2007, 08:29 PM	#4
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,047 Rep Power: 206	I kind of used to the same myself, till I could hold my hand on the frets, just strum now and then, but Yeah I agree, it is easier I suppose to use melody and chords to find your poetic truth. __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Nov 5, 2007, 08:26 PM	Thread Starter #5
Esaz666 BeardHeaven Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Uk,Earth,Universe,3rd dimention Posts: 298 Rep Power: 58	i think a lot of peotry is very musical and in its own way harmonious. Its a great way to get inspiration going, just jamming away for a bit on a guitar or something. I do it both ways, sometimes just paper other times with instruments or tracks allready recorded. Last edited by Esaz666; Nov 5, 2007 at 08:34 PM.

Oct 24, 2007, 11:46 AM	Thread Starter #3
Esaz666 BeardHeaven Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Uk,Earth,Universe,3rd dimention Posts: 298 Rep Power: 58	its not a song yet, but i only started writing poems through song writing, so many of my writings have a song like quality, they need a bit of work to turn them either one way or the other. i wrote this for friend who was having a bad time with relationships and all that stuff, she seems allright last time i saw her.