Civilisation circus

Esaz666 · Nov 26, 2007, 06:01 PM

On television what
do I see,
there’s nothing there,
only shadows be.

I’m walking down
uncivilisation street,
we tell lies,
you can realise.

Uncivilisation,
its only a word,
we call it progress,
move in a heard.

Towards your own
goal,
eyes forward,
do what your told.

Follow a myth,
if that’s what
your like,
there’s no escape,
for heavens sake.

A beautiful illusion
for us to make,
an illusion based
on give and take.

Taken from all
the world,
give nothing
back.

It’s only
civilisation,
that we
lack.

As we are broken
by our own deeds
and word,
wretched,
we begin again,
like children.

7.11.25

Falstaff · Nov 27, 2007, 10:11 PM

forgive me but the rhythem seems much like a song plucked on a guitar, is that how you write?

Esaz666 · Nov 28, 2007, 10:28 AM

not this time, i just wrote it , but my stuff does sound like songs through ,as i do like a good twang on a guitar!, unfortunately for anyone who is near

Nov 26, 2007, 06:01 PM	#1
Esaz666 BeardHeaven Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Uk,Earth,Universe,3rd dimention Posts: 298 Rep Power: 59	Civilisation circus On television what do I see, there’s nothing there, only shadows be. I’m walking down uncivilisation street, we tell lies, you can realise. Uncivilisation, its only a word, we call it progress, move in a heard. Towards your own goal, eyes forward, do what your told. Follow a myth, if that’s what your like, there’s no escape, for heavens sake. A beautiful illusion for us to make, an illusion based on give and take. Taken from all the world, give nothing back. It’s only civilisation, that we lack. As we are broken by our own deeds and word, wretched, we begin again, like children. 7.11.25

Nov 27, 2007, 10:11 PM	#2
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	forgive me but the rhythem seems much like a song plucked on a guitar, is that how you write? __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Nov 28, 2007, 10:28 AM	Thread Starter #3
Esaz666 BeardHeaven Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Uk,Earth,Universe,3rd dimention Posts: 298 Rep Power: 59	not this time, i just wrote it , but my stuff does sound like songs through ,as i do like a good twang on a guitar!, unfortunately for anyone who is near