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BeardHeaven
Join Date: Jun 2003
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Civilisation circus
On television what do I see, there’s nothing there, only shadows be. I’m walking down uncivilisation street, we tell lies, you can realise. Uncivilisation, its only a word, we call it progress, move in a heard. Towards your own goal, eyes forward, do what your told. Follow a myth, if that’s what your like, there’s no escape, for heavens sake. A beautiful illusion for us to make, an illusion based on give and take. Taken from all the world, give nothing back. It’s only civilisation, that we lack. As we are broken by our own deeds and word, wretched, we begin again, like children. 7.11.25 |
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Old Codger
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forgive me but the rhythem seems much like a song plucked on a guitar, is that how you write?
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BeardHeaven
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![]() not this time, i just wrote it , but my stuff does sound like songs through ,as i do like a good twang on a guitar!, unfortunately for anyone who is near
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