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BeardHeaven
Join Date: Jun 2003
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why sit?
why sit in the temple with your
spotless clothes?, why you are there?, nobody knows, you prostrate, and cry, but god has not arrived. he is out, with the man who made the road( to the temple), the dirty man who you threw out, gentle , with last years spotless clothes. |
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Old Codger
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this reminds me of a sanskrit text translated
you should try Haiku, I bet you would excel at that as well.
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BeardHeaven
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yeah you are right,
it is an indian idea, i just quickly wrote it, because i loved the idea so much, thanks. |
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Old Codger
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its a good one...
keep up the good work
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