why sit?

Esaz666 · Feb 22, 2008, 09:41 PM

why sit in the temple with your
spotless clothes?,
why you are there?,
nobody knows,
you prostrate, and cry,
but god has not arrived.

he is out, with the man
who made the road( to the temple),
the dirty man who you threw out, gentle ,
with last years spotless clothes.

Falstaff · Feb 25, 2008, 11:52 PM

this reminds me of a sanskrit text translated
you should try Haiku, I bet you would excel at that as well.

Esaz666 · Feb 27, 2008, 07:32 PM

yeah you are right,
it is an indian idea,
i just quickly wrote it,
because i loved the idea so much,

thanks.

Falstaff · Feb 28, 2008, 04:54 AM

its a good one...
keep up the good work

Feb 22, 2008, 09:41 PM	#1
Esaz666 BeardHeaven Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Uk,Earth,Universe,3rd dimention Posts: 298 Rep Power: 59	why sit? why sit in the temple with your spotless clothes?, why you are there?, nobody knows, you prostrate, and cry, but god has not arrived. he is out, with the man who made the road( to the temple), the dirty man who you threw out, gentle , with last years spotless clothes.

Feb 25, 2008, 11:52 PM	#2
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	this reminds me of a sanskrit text translated you should try Haiku, I bet you would excel at that as well. __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Feb 28, 2008, 04:54 AM	#4
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	its a good one... keep up the good work __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Feb 27, 2008, 07:32 PM	Thread Starter #3
Esaz666 BeardHeaven Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Uk,Earth,Universe,3rd dimention Posts: 298 Rep Power: 59	yeah you are right, it is an indian idea, i just quickly wrote it, because i loved the idea so much, thanks.