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Heavenly Echoes For those who treasure the written word, share your poetry, music, favourite writings and your own life experiences.

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Old Dec 27, 2008, 08:28 PM   #1
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Fallen

Night has fallen,
On cold unshifting ground.
Spirits calling,
Try to bring me down.

And all I see,
Is darkness in the mist.
Night is calling ,
Calling out too you.

The North wind wanders,
Speaking your name.
One to hold,
And to feel again.

A bitter chill,
Warms your heart.
A forgotten name,
Souls kept apart.

A sudden twist of fate,
For those drawn.
A final romantic kiss,
Brings darkness.

Night has fallen,
On cold unshifting ground.
Spirits calling,
Try to bring me down.

And all I see,
Is darkness in the mist.
Night is calling ,
Calling out too you .......
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Old Dec 27, 2008, 08:37 PM   #2
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Re: Fallen

got a dark twist, I wonder what that would sound like with a few dark chords as well.
very good.
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got a dark twist, I wonder what that would sound like with a few dark chords as well.
very good.
Thanks and actually the dark chords are taken care of compliments of my brother. I wrote the first 4 lines of this about 15 years ago then forgot all about it. Last summer I found it again in one of my music/lyric books and finished it off.

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