Waiting In The Dark

|2A|N · Jan 21, 2009, 08:49 AM

Waiting In The Dark

I ask myself, what does it take to live in such a free world,
but what is so free about living in a world,
is this the free world we really live to know.

I envy the small things in life, the things most people take for granted,
I always see how people pretend, pretend to be something,
something they are turned into and cant stand up against,
is this the price of failure, the price in such a free world.

I ask myself, what does it take to live in such a free world,
waiting in the dark but for what, waiting for my turn,
waiting In such a free world.

I see children running, but from what, a society they know so little about,
their innocence takin away from them, are they stuck,
stuck inside such a free world.

I ask myself, is that me I see waiting in the dark,
a world of opportunity suddenly that struck me down,
opportunity in such a free world.

I find myself filled with your breath you and I share,
it's harder to breathe, is this the price of living,
sharing in such a free world.

I ask myself, what does it take to live in such a free world,
waiting in the dark but for what, waiting for the consequence of my crimes,
crimes of consequence in such a free world.

Is this the free world we really live to know,
or is this the cost of Ignorance,
there is nothing left in such a free world,
when you have already taken It all.

Mac Daddy · Jan 21, 2009, 01:26 PM

Well written and a strong message man

|2A|N · Jan 23, 2009, 08:32 PM

Thanks, I wrote this about 3 years ago, among some other things I have posted on here as well.

I know as a person that people have more in common than we tend to think we do, after all we are all human

which is why I post these things from time to time. I write because I know people can relate to it, and well it makes me feel good to.

Mac Daddy · Jan 24, 2009, 12:51 AM

You are most welcome and thanks for posting them ... writing is a reflection of the person you are and a form of true expression like music

Jan 21, 2009, 08:49 AM	#1
\|2A\|N SE7EN57 Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Virginia Beach, VA Posts: 353 Rep Power: 71 System Specs	Waiting In The Dark Waiting In The Dark I ask myself, what does it take to live in such a free world, but what is so free about living in a world, is this the free world we really live to know. I envy the small things in life, the things most people take for granted, I always see how people pretend, pretend to be something, something they are turned into and cant stand up against, is this the price of failure, the price in such a free world. I ask myself, what does it take to live in such a free world, waiting in the dark but for what, waiting for my turn, waiting In such a free world. I see children running, but from what, a society they know so little about, their innocence takin away from them, are they stuck, stuck inside such a free world. I ask myself, is that me I see waiting in the dark, a world of opportunity suddenly that struck me down, opportunity in such a free world. I find myself filled with your breath you and I share, it's harder to breathe, is this the price of living, sharing in such a free world. I ask myself, what does it take to live in such a free world, waiting in the dark but for what, waiting for the consequence of my crimes, crimes of consequence in such a free world. Is this the free world we really live to know, or is this the cost of Ignorance, there is nothing left in such a free world, when you have already taken It all.

Jan 21, 2009, 01:26 PM	#2
Mac Daddy DriverHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Ontario, Canada Posts: 7,950 Rep Power: 78 System Specs	Re: Waiting In The Dark Well written and a strong message man __________________ "My mom said the only reason men are alive is for lawn care and vehicle maintenance." - Tim Allen

Jan 23, 2009, 08:32 PM	Thread Starter #3
\|2A\|N SE7EN57 Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Virginia Beach, VA Posts: 353 Rep Power: 71 System Specs	Re: Waiting In The Dark Thanks, I wrote this about 3 years ago, among some other things I have posted on here as well. I know as a person that people have more in common than we tend to think we do, after all we are all human which is why I post these things from time to time. I write because I know people can relate to it, and well it makes me feel good to.

Jan 24, 2009, 12:51 AM	#4
Mac Daddy DriverHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Ontario, Canada Posts: 7,950 Rep Power: 78 System Specs	Re: Waiting In The Dark You are most welcome and thanks for posting them ... writing is a reflection of the person you are and a form of true expression like music __________________ "My mom said the only reason men are alive is for lawn care and vehicle maintenance." - Tim Allen