A little thing I wrote some time back

skylineaddict · Mar 1, 2009, 07:16 AM

Back when my vocabulary wasn't great...

http://krazyboi.pbwiki.com/f/Ehh.doc

Falstaff · Mar 1, 2009, 11:31 AM

like a short story in Heavy Metal, it was engaging mate..
you should illustrate your stories.

Mac Daddy · Mar 1, 2009, 12:33 PM

Well written whether you thought your vocabulary was up to par or not ... so your creative abilities go beyond artwork that's cool

skylineaddict · Mar 1, 2009, 02:15 PM

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Originally Posted by Falstaff

like a short story in Heavy Metal, it was engaging mate..
you should illustrate your stories.

I wish I was a good enough artist to do that. I haven't studied enough facial or bodily anatomy to draw masterpieces straight out of my head without a reference picture.

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Originally Posted by Mac Daddy

Well written whether you thought your vocabulary was up to par or not ... so your creative abilities go beyond artwork that's cool

I still suffer from the throes of mediocrity. Many people can draw better than me, and even more can write better than me. I guess it's a sacrifice one makes to be reasonably good at many things

Falstaff · Mar 1, 2009, 04:29 PM

I think mere suggestions of form or values with significant contrasts are very good.
And frankly, your vocabulary is the province of English Majors, your words are fine mate.
I enjoyed it, and I am very sharp critic but very forgiving in the face of real creativity.
I am afraid there are lots of experts so keep writing, it isnt at all Mediocre.

skylineaddict · Mar 1, 2009, 04:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Falstaff

I think mere suggestions of form or values with significant contrasts are very good.
And frankly, your vocabulary is the province of English Majors, your words are fine mate.
I enjoyed it, and I am very sharp critic but very forgiving in the face of real creativity.
I am afraid there are lots of experts so keep writing, it isnt at all Mediocre.

So do I get rep? :P

Mar 1, 2009, 07:16 AM	#1
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Mar 1, 2009, 04:29 PM	#5
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	Re: A little thing I wrote some time back I think mere suggestions of form or values with significant contrasts are very good. And frankly, your vocabulary is the province of English Majors, your words are fine mate. I enjoyed it, and I am very sharp critic but very forgiving in the face of real creativity. I am afraid there are lots of experts so keep writing, it isnt at all Mediocre. __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."