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Sleep Deprived Ant
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A little thing I wrote some time back
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Re: A little thing I wrote some time back
like a short story in Heavy Metal, it was engaging mate..
you should illustrate your stories.
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Re: A little thing I wrote some time back
Well written whether you thought your vocabulary was up to par or not ... so your creative abilities go beyond artwork that's cool
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Re: A little thing I wrote some time back
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I wish I was a good enough artist to do that. I haven't studied enough facial or bodily anatomy to draw masterpieces straight out of my head without a reference picture. Quote:
I still suffer from the throes of mediocrity. Many people can draw better than me, and even more can write better than me. I guess it's a sacrifice one makes to be reasonably good at many things
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Re: A little thing I wrote some time back
I think mere suggestions of form or values with significant contrasts are very good.
And frankly, your vocabulary is the province of English Majors, your words are fine mate. I enjoyed it, and I am very sharp critic but very forgiving in the face of real creativity. I am afraid there are lots of experts so keep writing, it isnt at all Mediocre.
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Re: A little thing I wrote some time back
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So do I get rep? :P
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