Fortunate Soldier

~~FFVII - Cloud~~ · Aug 8, 2009, 10:20 AM

Unweary of amplitude
The soldier continued on
Spotting movement down 50m to the slight right of 12
Near a bush by a tree
He nealed down and aimed down scope
It was enemy crouched down
The soldier took aim at his throat
And feathered the hair trigger
Pop straight through his side neck and upside his head gone
He went down slowly
He was down

Moving forward on acute lookout
A radio call came in
It was nearby enemy chatter spotting a location downroad
The soldier decided to monitor from the safety of a nearby car door open
He pulled out his binoculars
Alas the enemy was moving the witnesses daughter out of location
The soldier got in the car and followed from a short distance

Arriving at an airport the car stopped
Two enemy soldiers got out and handcuffed the witnesses daughter

The soldier took aim downscope from behind the car
Aiming straight downside their heads

The witnesses daughter nelt down
Pop the shot went straight through both their heads and they went down
Getting the witnesses daughter they scoped the airport for a plane
Finding one they took off and headed for safe ground

THE END

Falstaff · Aug 8, 2009, 09:23 PM

DARK!!!!!!!
that was a bit scary man....

dawgXdenta · Oct 22, 2009, 10:05 AM

Not bad polish up the wording to make it more clear and you have a novel

~~RE III - Frankie~~ · Jan 12, 2010, 05:18 AM

Live it don't judge me

Aug 8, 2009, 10:20 AM	#1
~~FFVII - Cloud~~ Banned Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Somewhere Deserted Posts: 177 Rep Power: 0 System Specs	Fortunate Soldier Unweary of amplitude The soldier continued on Spotting movement down 50m to the slight right of 12 Near a bush by a tree He nealed down and aimed down scope It was enemy crouched down The soldier took aim at his throat And feathered the hair trigger Pop straight through his side neck and upside his head gone He went down slowly He was down Moving forward on acute lookout A radio call came in It was nearby enemy chatter spotting a location downroad The soldier decided to monitor from the safety of a nearby car door open He pulled out his binoculars Alas the enemy was moving the witnesses daughter out of location The soldier got in the car and followed from a short distance Arriving at an airport the car stopped Two enemy soldiers got out and handcuffed the witnesses daughter The soldier took aim downscope from behind the car Aiming straight downside their heads The witnesses daughter nelt down Pop the shot went straight through both their heads and they went down Getting the witnesses daughter they scoped the airport for a plane Finding one they took off and headed for safe ground THE END

Aug 8, 2009, 09:23 PM	#2
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,047 Rep Power: 206	Re: Fortunate Soldier DARK!!!!!!! that was a bit scary man.... __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Oct 22, 2009, 10:05 AM	#3
dawgXdenta HardwareHeaven Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Gabz Posts: 1,988 Rep Power: 133 System Specs	Re: Fortunate Soldier Not bad polish up the wording to make it more clear and you have a novel __________________ Today's world is of public opinion and the fates of nations are determined through its pressure. Once the tools for building public opinion are obtained, everything that you asked for can be done. --- Osama bin Laden when relating how global media has the minds of the masses. ______________________________________ http://dawgxdenta.deviantart.com/gallery/

Jan 12, 2010, 05:18 AM	#4
~~RE III - Frankie~~ Banned Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 1,754 Rep Power: 0	Re: Fortunate Soldier Live it don't judge me