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A Spiritual Journey
OK. I just started. I'm trapped in a house in a forest and it's dark. I'm in the hall up against the wall and there is a big black Wolf hunting me down outside. Under infrared I can see the walls are covered in a pink slime and there are ghosts spirits and demons everywhere. I'm too afraid to move. Downhall to the left there is a closet opposite me around a corner. To the far end on the right is the kitchen. Behind me on the left is room. In it is a TV and video player. I'm too afarid to move. To the far left is the entrance to the house. Now I don't want to just leave because these are the types beings that follow you wherever you go. So this battle has to be faught now. I'm going into the room with the TV. I have an idea to draw all the spirits into this room. I find a video with some kind of ritual spell on it. I decide to play it. Hopefully it draws all the evil into this room. I go back out into the hall. I put my infrared back on. It's working all the ghosts are heading for that room. Now the wolf. There is a phone in the kitchen. I don't know if it works, but I wouldn't know who to call either. I'll leave it for now. In the hall. To my right behind me is a bedroom. I can hear the wolf scratching at the wall and growling just outside it. The moon is shining in. I'm stuck in the hall again. What should I do?
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
this reads like a game mate.
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
It does Jeff and I like it Frankie
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
Thanks heaps guys. Hint: I'm still waiting on inspiration? to continue the story.
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
I go into the bedroom. On the wall next to the door is an enchanting cross hung up with the words "The Black Cross of Elizabeth Bathory" written underneith it. I take the cross and put it in my back pocket. Back out in the hall I decide to check out the closet. Inside there are towels, a vaccum cleaner, sheets and a single barrel pump-action shot gun. I grab the shot gun and head for the kitchen. I find some tape in a draw by the sink. I tape the cross to the end of the shotgun.
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
Mysteriously hidden in my jacket pocket I find a note. On it is written,
"Death Is Not Enough I see palm leaves moving everywhere Cats come to visit Then sharks and crocodiles Monkeys Dogs Witches and Demons And they all die They all die every one of them over and over again They killed them They killed them to stop them from helping me They won't stop killing them No matter how much we cry They'll keep killing them They'll kill them for coming to me They won't stop They'll never stop because for them Death Is Not Enough" I wonder what it means? I wonder who could have written such a note and why was it in my pocket? Had someone put it there. Was it one of the ghosts? |
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
I drop the note on the floor and head outside.
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
Outside it's cold and I can hear the Wolf coming. I waver the gun in the direction I can feel he will be. He approaches from around the corner and starts towards me. I aim downsite on my hairtrigger and blast his damn head off. No more wolfie. I drop the gun and go inside to call the local animal authority. the lines dead.
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
Back outside. I forget that I am here and light a cigarette. It tastes so good I don't care if I have to stay in this place. Out of the darkness I notice in the distance a helicopter ladning just over the far mountain. I decide that I I am going for it and go back inside to find the gun. heading towards the ladning zone I don't run into any trouble. I'm finally here now. Just to be careful though I watch to see what's happening around the helicopter. There are two men dressed in black suits and they are talking. It seems friendly enough so I go over there. They say we can take it from here and ask for the gun in my right hand. I hand it over and head for the chopper. I climb in and sit down and suddenly I feel a sense of security. I don't know eher I am going, but as long as it's away from here I am happy to do so.
4 hours later on an island out at sea away from the mainland the helicopter lands. The two men escort me inside a grey building and tell me to wait in a room. Suddenly the doors close and I'm locked inside without an explanation. There is a bed in the room and the room is not very big. I decide that it's been a long day so I'll use this time to rest for a while. Morning comes and someone who looks sciency enters my room. he asks me questions about what went on in the house. I told him everything and he says well now we have a job for you. He brings me to a room with a large screen on the wall. In the room is a man dressed in military attire and he starts discussing acontainment of the animals who have become infected from a foreign virus which makes them hunt down and kill people. he wants me on the team who have a lead on where this virus apparently originated. |
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I reluctantly decline and request full military outfit for my lone treck to find civilization. They privide me with a jeep and a highpowered machine gun attached. Boxes and boxes of ammo and a stash of rifels and pipe bombs. They tell me that the next installation is a 400 mile hike down witcher's path. A notorious gang area. they tell me to radio in if I need help. But I won't. I'm doing this on my own.
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5 miles down the road I enter into a bloody masacre and am unable to keep going. On the news later on that night it is reported to the country that my body was discoverd 12 hours after having been blown to pieces by 5 shotgunners 12 rocket launchers and a high powered ground mounted machine gun.
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I return as a ghost and find myself waiting on the beach to meet up with a girl who lives out in the darkness of the ocean, she doesn't show up for 2 hours so I go to the hospital where I was born. Behind it is a psych ward and i wait in the carpark to check out all the action. As I am there, there is a person sitting in a car blaring garage mujsic and I notice two doctor looking people pass by him and eye him quite nastily. I decide to get in the car with this person to see where they take me.
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
what ?
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
Are we supposed to join in or just follow your story?
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
Or maybe just ignore it completely
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This is too much for me so I decide to go towards the nearby lights at the top of the road. I reach the end of the road and the next road leads to where there is a small town. I walk down the street. There is a pub here and a lot of people inside. they are really going for it. I take a look throught the window. Music is playing everyone's yelling and drinking a lot. Suddenly a guy steps back onto another guys shoes and a fight breaks out. The two guys step outside and go for it. One guy grabs the other guy buy the neck and headbutts him which sends him down to the ground clutching his forehead. The guy on the ground puts his hand up to signal the other guyt had beaten him then he picks himself up and they both head back in. This is boring so i open up a teleport and head for the airport. |
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
I guess this has ended with the downfall of Frankie..what happened to him? spamming ?
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
To put it nicely..... he was being a jerk.
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
After careful consideration and deciding on a location "The Wolf" took a path to the Orient no doubt for the glorious heat.
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Re: A Spiritual Journey
He's back!
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So to the Orient I head.
The airoplane was boring just sitting in the baggage compartment alone apart from the stuartdess visiting to retrieve stacked food trays periodically I was completely alone the whole time. Upon arrival I head outside the airport where I notice a mysterious man standing outside a car waiting for the driver to open the door. This man drops a "slip" on the ground before getting in the car. I look at the slip and it reads, "To find out what they're not telling you follow the path to the Japanese Seaboard" -The Overbios LORD. P.S. The ship you are looking for is called, "The Grey Leviticus" How strange. I thought. So I get in the car with these people and we head towards the docks, looking for a ship. Getting there I followed the mysterious stranger, Jim, as the driver called him, to a large cargo ship, The Grey Leviticus. I overhear the dockmaster mention that the ship will be in dock for the next 48 hours and follow Jim onto the ship. |
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Jim leads me past a closed door where I can here a man and woman who are arguing with someone with a foreign accent. I overhear the man saying, "Just because we were in the boundary doesn't mean we did it on purpose!" Jim caually strides past the door and I follow. We get to a storage room full of crates and baggage. He leads me to a quite large crate labelled, "Cane's Venetici SG01". He notes the label and calls for someone to unearth whatever is inside. Afterwards all the sides had been taken down their is a large pearl-like wolf statue inside. On closer observation the pearl-like structure is laced with goldvein throughout it's appearance. I suddenly have a relapse of thought. I thought to myself why would the note lead me here to see this statue and what can it have to do with the black wolf (who I thought I had killed anyway?)
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Suddenly the casing of the wolf I had been hunting slits open and I can see his one-eye peering at me has he gnarls at me through the gap in the container. I run for it, and head down the hall..
A white light appears in the middle of the hall and I pause then approach it, I put my hand out and I feel the touch of someone's hand they pull me through the rift and I turn around and the rift closes.. I wonder what I'm doing in here .. and a voice calls out to me, I loof for some one, but only see clouds everywhere. I close my eyes and drift away into the clouds and feel myself falling..suddenly SPLASH I ended up overboard. But I'm aghost so it can't be. I hear a howl and look around to see the wolf jump in after me.. He struggle in the deep water, but he cannot stay afloat and he drifts slowly down.. I look at him and he's gone. I wonder what the f**k I'm going to do now so I just lay back and drift with the ocean.. 2 days later I awake in my room and I'm typing at my keyboard. It's late and I wonder if I have enough smokes to keep me going. I pause Then I start typing again. THE END [CLASSIFIED] [TO BE CONCLUDED] Last edited by RE III - Frankie; Jan 8, 2010 at 04:22 PM. |
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