Reflection Of Inner Being & Autumn's Twilight

Necrosis · May 31, 2004, 03:27 AM

Reflection Of Inner Being

Sitting in front of this mirror
see my inner self
doubtless to my feelings
like I could give a care
The reflection shaded in gray
the mirror cleaned with
a rag filthy with sorrow
wasn't my fault
wasn't even there
rest of the world
adorned the prize
I see through myself
no inner density at all
no matter how hard I try
nothing there to call

No purpose to what I do
see myself for the first time
quite shocking and true
I didn't see myself but the
image of you
I asked this manifestation to
leave my soul
No reply is what I got
a lock on my heart
someday I will take it off

Darkness overcasts this image I see
maybe an end to it or me
but I don't really care
sitting on a tension time bomb
only forgetting my job

Live no more, seen so much
don't like to give into the image
or the way it punches the inside walls
I built up to protect myself
Finally I realize I will never win
Two persons I shall forever be
all of them not not quite what I
thought I would see
Doesn't matter anyway
The image is really just me.

Autumn's Twilight

blue waters of salvation
clear like your sparkling eyes
like the stars on a clear night
you are a blessing from god to me
your beauty a flower amongst many thorns
tears at the soul of compassion
the voice I hear is of your own
a song echoing in the silence
a song I deserve not to hear.

Zardon · May 31, 2004, 07:26 AM

who wrote those?

pr0digal jenius · May 31, 2004, 09:15 AM

someone with a g/f named autumn perhaps?

Falstaff · May 31, 2004, 03:01 PM

its pretty good.....very good

Necrosis · May 31, 2004, 06:44 PM

I wrote them.

Falstaff · May 31, 2004, 07:16 PM

awesome, reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe

pr0digal jenius · May 31, 2004, 11:50 PM

yea, i was thinkign the same....or maybe Jorge Borgis(Spelling)...he's really good too

Necrosis · Jun 1, 2004, 01:56 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by fallang_jeff
awesome, reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe

Thanks...though I find everything I write I personally think it sucks. Never "good" enough to me.

**dj_stick** · Jun 1, 2004, 02:00 AM

no artwork, in any form, is ever "good enough" for the artist

May 31, 2004, 03:27 AM	#1
Necrosis HardwareHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Ohio Posts: 8,838 Rep Power: 131 System Specs	Reflection Of Inner Being & Autumn's Twilight Reflection Of Inner Being Sitting in front of this mirror see my inner self doubtless to my feelings like I could give a care The reflection shaded in gray the mirror cleaned with a rag filthy with sorrow wasn't my fault wasn't even there rest of the world adorned the prize I see through myself no inner density at all no matter how hard I try nothing there to call No purpose to what I do see myself for the first time quite shocking and true I didn't see myself but the image of you I asked this manifestation to leave my soul No reply is what I got a lock on my heart someday I will take it off Darkness overcasts this image I see maybe an end to it or me but I don't really care sitting on a tension time bomb only forgetting my job Live no more, seen so much don't like to give into the image or the way it punches the inside walls I built up to protect myself Finally I realize I will never win Two persons I shall forever be all of them not not quite what I thought I would see Doesn't matter anyway The image is really just me. Autumn's Twilight blue waters of salvation clear like your sparkling eyes like the stars on a clear night you are a blessing from god to me your beauty a flower amongst many thorns tears at the soul of compassion the voice I hear is of your own a song echoing in the silence a song I deserve not to hear.

May 31, 2004, 03:01 PM	#4
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	its pretty good.....very good __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

May 31, 2004, 07:16 PM	#6
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	awesome, reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

May 31, 2004, 07:26 AM	#2
Zardon DriverHeaven Founder Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 32,480 Rep Power: 179	who wrote those?

May 31, 2004, 09:15 AM	#3
pr0digal jenius Delete Me Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 14,648 Rep Power: 0	someone with a g/f named autumn perhaps?

May 31, 2004, 06:44 PM	Thread Starter #5
Necrosis HardwareHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Ohio Posts: 8,838 Rep Power: 131 System Specs	I wrote them.

May 31, 2004, 11:50 PM	#7
pr0digal jenius Delete Me Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 14,648 Rep Power: 0	yea, i was thinkign the same....or maybe Jorge Borgis(Spelling)...he's really good too