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Jun 2, 2004, 07:44 PM
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I = Greatest Dood
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*Kept Away* Just a quickie... no edits
I always talk to myself poetically.... thats how i share my thoughts... sometimes its good sometimes it sucks
this is the 1 time that i recorded as i was driving home... needs work but to me the original thought means the most... i will be posting more sometime Kept away Why cant we be why dont they just leave us alone i dont understand what they see to keep us apart by turning me to stone we cant see eachother we cant even talk just because they dont want us together i cringe every moment i notice were apart as lookin at the clock the time that passes by without being with you I want to be with you night and day hopefully someday hun as every night i pray that some day we can be one Sometime we will be together when no one will even bother to keep us away from eachother When the time comes when everthing we worked for sums we will have a house and family together living the life weve always wanted
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Jun 2, 2004, 08:57 PM
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pretty good greg, keep it up
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Jun 2, 2004, 09:08 PM
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you're more coherent talkign to yourself then I am when i try to talk to others...lol....awesome work tho., keep em comin
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Jun 2, 2004, 09:19 PM
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boo!!!!
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very good work!!!
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Jun 2, 2004, 09:23 PM
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for those who gave me sh!t for talking to myself its on the road during 8 hour long drives... what else does a kid got to do? lol
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Jun 2, 2004, 09:46 PM
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i sing along with the radio..it's all good
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Jun 2, 2004, 11:26 PM
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thats much different lol.... i sing too but then i talk to myself lol
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Jun 3, 2004, 12:04 AM
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lol....i talk to myself in the shower....but not the car...lol
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Jun 3, 2004, 12:47 AM
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good poem...
talking to yourself is fine...it is when you start answering yourself that you should worry 
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Jun 3, 2004, 01:01 AM
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.....damn....
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Jun 3, 2004, 03:54 AM
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brilliant bud, really like it...
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