Controversy

GutterPunk · Jun 3, 2004, 06:37 PM

This again is a lil about me and my girl... gossip assimilation... everyone goes through it... Im from a town of 500 people (Hershey, Nebraska USA) Here everyone gossips about any irregularities, height age defect it dont matter... cliques are huge, and people do anything to fit in. Some people like msyelf are different and dont like assimilation or comformity. I like to be myself... Again, this is straight from what i say/type no changes (cept for spelling)... Welp here goes

Controversy

I love you so much brittany
I just get sick of the scrutiny
all the people chatter
just one day i hope they scatter

they dont understand
we have 1 thing they will never have
the comprehension they will never savvy
they will always pick around their band

We try to take a stand
against those stupid pricks
residing in annoying cliques
together we fight this battle hand in hand

Its not like this in every town
the bigger the city the better off we would be
where everybody doesnt want to see
what we do in your private lives
not even if we cut eachother with knives
they would go on in their own lives

as we graduate and move on
we will leave these stupid fools
who will be lost in the pools
of not having anyone to fall back on

these people will never make it
they are to busy messing everyone else up
living their lives being stuck up
Never letting anyone in without comformity
If you ask me i think its bullshit

that they cant accept anyone
not even us not bothering them
we live our lives away from them
but yet they still interfere

Falstaff · Jun 3, 2004, 06:39 PM

pretty good bro
the babysitter or sammy couldnt make ya write like that, where does it come from?

GutterPunk · Jun 3, 2004, 06:41 PM

Comes from my special someone Brittany, and the persecution of the assholes that think everyone should do what they do

Falstaff · Jun 3, 2004, 06:42 PM

know what ya mean bro..I do

pr0digal jenius · Jun 3, 2004, 10:11 PM

it takes serious skill to use pricks and bullshit in a poem and still give it an artistic feel.....great work...and don't let people get to ya, envy is the first part of hatred, and don't forget it

GutterPunk · Jun 3, 2004, 11:32 PM

wow nice words prodigal, i was upset when i wrote this lol... i figured some vulgarity will give it clarity, not sure if it worked right. it wasnt fully going towards an artsy feeling but more free expressions, thanks for the comment. is it okay to hate... hate?

pr0digal jenius · Jun 3, 2004, 11:36 PM

hating hate seems rather paradoxical and a bit hypocritical

GutterPunk · Jun 3, 2004, 11:37 PM

ur right, i dont hate i dislike.... lots lol

people go hatin on others i dont hate back just dont associate

pr0digal jenius · Jun 3, 2004, 11:43 PM

there ya go

Jun 3, 2004, 06:37 PM	#1
GutterPunk I = Greatest Dood Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Nebraska Posts: 5,949 Rep Power: 71	Controversy This again is a lil about me and my girl... gossip assimilation... everyone goes through it... Im from a town of 500 people (Hershey, Nebraska USA) Here everyone gossips about any irregularities, height age defect it dont matter... cliques are huge, and people do anything to fit in. Some people like msyelf are different and dont like assimilation or comformity. I like to be myself... Again, this is straight from what i say/type no changes (cept for spelling)... Welp here goes Controversy I love you so much brittany I just get sick of the scrutiny all the people chatter just one day i hope they scatter they dont understand we have 1 thing they will never have the comprehension they will never savvy they will always pick around their band We try to take a stand against those stupid pricks residing in annoying cliques together we fight this battle hand in hand Its not like this in every town the bigger the city the better off we would be where everybody doesnt want to see what we do in your private lives not even if we cut eachother with knives they would go on in their own lives as we graduate and move on we will leave these stupid fools who will be lost in the pools of not having anyone to fall back on these people will never make it they are to busy messing everyone else up living their lives being stuck up Never letting anyone in without comformity If you ask me i think its bullshit that they cant accept anyone not even us not bothering them we live our lives away from them but yet they still interfere __________________ Rock On \m/ Thank you Mousey for the Sig! --------------- Intel Core2Duo E6660 (3.4GHZ) ~ Tuniq Tower 120 ~ Enermax Galaxy 1000W ~ Corsair Dominator @ 1090MHZ 5-5-5-15 (OCZ XTC Modded Cooler)~ EVGA 8800GTX W/ HR-03 Plus 120MM ~ Asus DVD-RW LiteScribe ~ LG DVD-RW ~ Corsair Voyager 2GB ReadyBoost Drive ~ Vantec Nexus Fan Controller ~ ThermalTake Armor 25CM fan ~ Personal Finance Blog: Dent Your Debt

Jun 3, 2004, 06:39 PM	#2
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	pretty good bro the babysitter or sammy couldnt make ya write like that, where does it come from? __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Jun 3, 2004, 06:41 PM	Thread Starter #3
GutterPunk I = Greatest Dood Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Nebraska Posts: 5,949 Rep Power: 71	Comes from my special someone Brittany, and the persecution of the assholes that think everyone should do what they do __________________ Rock On \m/ Thank you Mousey for the Sig! --------------- Intel Core2Duo E6660 (3.4GHZ) ~ Tuniq Tower 120 ~ Enermax Galaxy 1000W ~ Corsair Dominator @ 1090MHZ 5-5-5-15 (OCZ XTC Modded Cooler)~ EVGA 8800GTX W/ HR-03 Plus 120MM ~ Asus DVD-RW LiteScribe ~ LG DVD-RW ~ Corsair Voyager 2GB ReadyBoost Drive ~ Vantec Nexus Fan Controller ~ ThermalTake Armor 25CM fan ~ Personal Finance Blog: Dent Your Debt

Jun 3, 2004, 06:42 PM	#4
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	know what ya mean bro..I do __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Jun 3, 2004, 11:32 PM	Thread Starter #6
GutterPunk I = Greatest Dood Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Nebraska Posts: 5,949 Rep Power: 71	wow nice words prodigal, i was upset when i wrote this lol... i figured some vulgarity will give it clarity, not sure if it worked right. it wasnt fully going towards an artsy feeling but more free expressions, thanks for the comment. is it okay to hate... hate? __________________ Rock On \m/ Thank you Mousey for the Sig! --------------- Intel Core2Duo E6660 (3.4GHZ) ~ Tuniq Tower 120 ~ Enermax Galaxy 1000W ~ Corsair Dominator @ 1090MHZ 5-5-5-15 (OCZ XTC Modded Cooler)~ EVGA 8800GTX W/ HR-03 Plus 120MM ~ Asus DVD-RW LiteScribe ~ LG DVD-RW ~ Corsair Voyager 2GB ReadyBoost Drive ~ Vantec Nexus Fan Controller ~ ThermalTake Armor 25CM fan ~ Personal Finance Blog: Dent Your Debt

Jun 3, 2004, 10:11 PM	#5
pr0digal jenius Delete Me Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 14,648 Rep Power: 0	it takes serious skill to use pricks and bullshit in a poem and still give it an artistic feel.....great work...and don't let people get to ya, envy is the first part of hatred, and don't forget it

Jun 3, 2004, 11:36 PM	#7
pr0digal jenius Delete Me Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 14,648 Rep Power: 0	hating hate seems rather paradoxical and a bit hypocritical

Jun 3, 2004, 11:37 PM	Thread Starter #8
GutterPunk I = Greatest Dood Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Nebraska Posts: 5,949 Rep Power: 71	ur right, i dont hate i dislike.... lots lol people go hatin on others i dont hate back just dont associate __________________ Rock On \m/ Thank you Mousey for the Sig! --------------- Intel Core2Duo E6660 (3.4GHZ) ~ Tuniq Tower 120 ~ Enermax Galaxy 1000W ~ Corsair Dominator @ 1090MHZ 5-5-5-15 (OCZ XTC Modded Cooler)~ EVGA 8800GTX W/ HR-03 Plus 120MM ~ Asus DVD-RW LiteScribe ~ LG DVD-RW ~ Corsair Voyager 2GB ReadyBoost Drive ~ Vantec Nexus Fan Controller ~ ThermalTake Armor 25CM fan ~ Personal Finance Blog: Dent Your Debt

Jun 3, 2004, 11:43 PM	#9
pr0digal jenius Delete Me Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 14,648 Rep Power: 0	there ya go