war

danjufo · Jun 5, 2004, 09:41 PM

i don't suppose it is truely suited here as it is rather a short and amature poem. but i found this poem and was quite amused by it once i saw that it was written by a pair of 13 year olds. i was inspired because they are so young, and yet still reminded of the wars.. and they see no worth in it. i also like the speed of the poem, you get faster to the point you feel you are racing, and then it calms down and they finish with there worthless war ending.

anyway, i just thought i would share it

Jun 5, 2004, 09:41 PM	#1
danjufo DH.Sig.Maker Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: england Posts: 1,231 Rep Power: 0	war i don't suppose it is truely suited here as it is rather a short and amature poem. but i found this poem and was quite amused by it once i saw that it was written by a pair of 13 year olds. i was inspired because they are so young, and yet still reminded of the wars.. and they see no worth in it. i also like the speed of the poem, you get faster to the point you feel you are racing, and then it calms down and they finish with there worthless war ending. anyway, i just thought i would share it __________________ [COLOR=dimgray]DeviantArt Gallery[/COLOR] [COLOR=silver]How to add your signature image[/COLOR] [COLOR=white]Signature + Avatar Rules[/COLOR]