Time speaks

patje · Aug 12, 2004, 04:51 PM

Well, this is actually a first attempt to make something.
Personally, I like it, but that's just me

I don't think it is according to the "rules" of poetry but rules can be bend

Falstaff · Aug 12, 2004, 07:23 PM

that could be a song...did you write that?

patje · Aug 13, 2004, 10:23 AM

Yep, this is all homebrew stuff.

Well the the last line is actually from a song named "Time is on my side"
You should watch the movie "Fallen" with Denzel Washinton, it gets mentionend during that movie. btw, it's a really good movie.

Falstaff · Aug 13, 2004, 05:00 PM

Oh yes I remember, he was possessed by a demon, that was a scary movie, since that is pricisely how demons possess people, they perpetuate themselves. A person cannot become an angel by doing good works on earth, but they can become a demon by being evil enough.

Aug 12, 2004, 04:51 PM	#1
patje Former Mobility Modman Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Belgium / Antwerp Posts: 1,475 Rep Power: 66	Time speaks Well, this is actually a first attempt to make something. Personally, I like it, but that's just me I don't think it is according to the "rules" of poetry but rules can be bend __________________

Aug 12, 2004, 07:23 PM	#2
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	that could be a song...did you write that? __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Aug 13, 2004, 10:23 AM	Thread Starter #3
patje Former Mobility Modman Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Belgium / Antwerp Posts: 1,475 Rep Power: 66	Yep, this is all homebrew stuff. Well the the last line is actually from a song named "Time is on my side" You should watch the movie "Fallen" with Denzel Washinton, it gets mentionend during that movie. btw, it's a really good movie. __________________

Aug 13, 2004, 05:00 PM	#4
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	Oh yes I remember, he was possessed by a demon, that was a scary movie, since that is pricisely how demons possess people, they perpetuate themselves. A person cannot become an angel by doing good works on earth, but they can become a demon by being evil enough. __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."