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Heavenly Echoes For those who treasure the written word, share your poetry, music, favourite writings and your own life experiences.

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Old Aug 12, 2004, 07:41 PM   #1
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fallen leaves
her neck and face filled with blush and glow

she waited till the rain warmed on her skin

she felt his kiss, his caress and his love grow

they lay in the damp fallen leaves, and she consumed him.
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Old Aug 13, 2004, 10:25 AM   #2
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had to read it 3 times to understand it (guess due to my english) , but I think it's really good.
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Old Aug 13, 2004, 05:01 PM Threadstarter Thread Starter   #3
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thankyou, used to write love poetry to all my wives..lol
I am looking for something like Haiku
A little vignette in time.
A visual effect or transformation when you read it.
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Old Aug 20, 2004, 04:11 PM   #4
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very nice poem . i dont think it can be used in english class tho lol
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Old Aug 20, 2004, 04:55 PM Threadstarter Thread Starter   #5
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can so...laddy chatterlys lover, the scarlet letter...my darling my hamburger....my daughter read that in english class. I guess it is a damn sight better than forum letters from Penthouse, and less graphic, therefore the better
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Old Aug 20, 2004, 10:49 PM   #6
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Old Aug 21, 2004, 01:29 AM Threadstarter Thread Starter   #7
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thanx stig
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np man was very good, and i don't make it to this forum often so u know it was good.
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