sweet sweet love

tastyweat · Aug 30, 2004, 07:02 PM

Lyning next
while sky of fire
send a text
and light a pyre

love is not a simple thing
try and not to sleep with Ling

sweet as sorrow
soft as glass

we make special
parts on fire

sleep sweet thing
your job is done

meet me in
the hazey plane

sing sweet metaphor
and rejoice

tomorrow...
we will sing some more
--- A Jon "Tastyweat" MacRae original.... I know I'm not the best poet ever.... but I thought it was good for expressing feelings.

Falstaff · Aug 30, 2004, 09:16 PM

this could be a jazz song mate.....I knew you were a softy....lol
hey, you still in San Fran"crisco"?

tastyweat · Aug 31, 2004, 12:11 AM

nah.... I've been back in uk for a little while now... since the 25th... I should really change that

Falstaff · Aug 31, 2004, 12:29 AM

I dont know tasty, maybe San Francisco made you feel free, and fresh and alive, and allowed you to become your true self.......or not.bwhahahahahhahahahha...j/k

Aug 30, 2004, 07:02 PM	#1
tastyweat Lurking Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: The void Posts: 4,794 Rep Power: 75 System Specs	sweet sweet love Lyning next while sky of fire send a text and light a pyre love is not a simple thing try and not to sleep with Ling sweet as sorrow soft as glass we make special parts on fire sleep sweet thing your job is done meet me in the hazey plane sing sweet metaphor and rejoice tomorrow... we will sing some more --- A Jon "Tastyweat" MacRae original.... I know I'm not the best poet ever.... but I thought it was good for expressing feelings. __________________

Aug 30, 2004, 09:16 PM	#2
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	this could be a jazz song mate.....I knew you were a softy....lol hey, you still in San Fran"crisco"? __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Aug 31, 2004, 12:11 AM	Thread Starter #3
tastyweat Lurking Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: The void Posts: 4,794 Rep Power: 75 System Specs	nah.... I've been back in uk for a little while now... since the 25th... I should really change that __________________

Aug 31, 2004, 12:29 AM	#4
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	I dont know tasty, maybe San Francisco made you feel free, and fresh and alive, and allowed you to become your true self.......or not.bwhahahahahhahahahha...j/k __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."