I titled this poem "Insanity"

DarkerFate · Sep 26, 2004, 08:55 PM

The day has finally come,

I have left behind my sanity.

I no longer have a place,

within this – your reality.

In no one I ever see,

I can find compatibility.

And this is my reality.

I finally ended up with insanity,

trying to take control of my mortality.

Grasp this in all of it’s totality,

and this will be your reality.

And this is my insanity.

**dj_stick** · Sep 30, 2004, 03:01 PM

i like that one

classic_leon · Sep 30, 2004, 04:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DarkerFate

In no one I ever see,

I can find compatibility.

I like these words

GutterPunk · Sep 30, 2004, 04:54 PM

very cool dude i like it

Falstaff · Sep 30, 2004, 05:07 PM

I can hear some power cords in that one...

Zardon · Sep 30, 2004, 05:30 PM

yes thats very good indeed, I like that one.

Drakon · Sep 30, 2004, 07:41 PM

pretty cool writing...

DarkerFate · Oct 1, 2004, 12:56 PM

Thanks

It's one of the poems I treasure the most

Also has been read infront of classrooms in 4 different countries, by my friends.

Sep 26, 2004, 08:55 PM	#1
DarkerFate DriverHeaven Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Iceland Posts: 74 Rep Power: 0	I titled this poem "Insanity" The day has finally come, I have left behind my sanity. I no longer have a place, within this – your reality. In no one I ever see, I can find compatibility. And this is my reality. I finally ended up with insanity, trying to take control of my mortality. Grasp this in all of it’s totality, and this will be your reality. And this is my insanity. __________________

Sep 30, 2004, 04:54 PM	#4
GutterPunk I = Greatest Dood Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Nebraska Posts: 5,949 Rep Power: 71	very cool dude i like it __________________ Rock On \m/ Thank you Mousey for the Sig! --------------- Intel Core2Duo E6660 (3.4GHZ) ~ Tuniq Tower 120 ~ Enermax Galaxy 1000W ~ Corsair Dominator @ 1090MHZ 5-5-5-15 (OCZ XTC Modded Cooler)~ EVGA 8800GTX W/ HR-03 Plus 120MM ~ Asus DVD-RW LiteScribe ~ LG DVD-RW ~ Corsair Voyager 2GB ReadyBoost Drive ~ Vantec Nexus Fan Controller ~ ThermalTake Armor 25CM fan ~ Personal Finance Blog: Dent Your Debt

Sep 30, 2004, 05:07 PM	#5
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	I can hear some power cords in that one... __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Oct 1, 2004, 12:56 PM	Thread Starter #8
DarkerFate DriverHeaven Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Iceland Posts: 74 Rep Power: 0	Thanks It's one of the poems I treasure the most Also has been read infront of classrooms in 4 different countries, by my friends. __________________

Sep 30, 2004, 05:30 PM	#6
Zardon DriverHeaven Founder Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 32,480 Rep Power: 179	yes thats very good indeed, I like that one.

Sep 30, 2004, 07:41 PM	#7
Drakon DriverHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Floatin'... Posts: 4,957 Rep Power: 0	pretty cool writing...