Depressed

Mocca · Oct 18, 2004, 02:25 AM

I sat and was depressed some months ago and wrote this... it's not finished and I don't know if it'll ever be.

The world is coming to an End
can you feel it too, my friend?
everything that we desire
consequence just keeps rocketing higher.

Ignorance, hate and disillusion
growing rapidly into planetary confusion
six billion people left to feed
another billion in plan for breed.

Falstaff · Oct 18, 2004, 03:51 AM

this could develope into a song man...keep it up..

Drakon · Oct 18, 2004, 05:47 AM

i like it so far. u should try and finish it...

Mocca · Oct 18, 2004, 01:17 PM

Thanks for the inpout guys.
I'll try to finish it, but then I need to be as depressed again as back then, else it'll just sound false and not like a part of the first 2 verses...

I'll do my best to get depressed

classic_leon · Oct 18, 2004, 05:21 PM

Yeah, good. no people=no emotion; more people=much emotion.

Ript_Van_Winkle · Oct 21, 2004, 02:14 AM

It sounds like a Dr. Seuss rhyme...

MythicaL · Oct 21, 2004, 02:33 AM

Cool... sounds like it could be made into a good Tool song

Mocca · Oct 21, 2004, 10:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ript_Van_Winkle

It sounds like a Dr. Seuss rhyme...

I don't know who Dr. Seuss is... but I can asure you it's homebred.

And thanks for the nice comments, guys.

ToshiroOC · Oct 21, 2004, 10:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ript_Van_Winkle

It sounds like a Dr. Seuss rhyme...

That isn't really a constructive criticism... and if we're going to criticise work here, lets at least make it useful criticism?

Oct 18, 2004, 02:25 AM	#1
Mocca Somewhere in time Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Denmark Posts: 133 Rep Power: 0	Depressed I sat and was depressed some months ago and wrote this... it's not finished and I don't know if it'll ever be. The world is coming to an End can you feel it too, my friend? everything that we desire consequence just keeps rocketing higher. Ignorance, hate and disillusion growing rapidly into planetary confusion six billion people left to feed another billion in plan for breed. __________________ AMD64 3800+ Dualcore Asus A8N-E Nforce4 Ultra Chipset 2048MB Kingston HyperX Dualchan pc3200 Ram Asus 7800GTX PCI-E 16x Graphicscard

Oct 18, 2004, 03:51 AM	#2
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	this could develope into a song man...keep it up.. __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Oct 18, 2004, 01:17 PM	Thread Starter #4
Mocca Somewhere in time Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Denmark Posts: 133 Rep Power: 0	Thanks for the inpout guys. I'll try to finish it, but then I need to be as depressed again as back then, else it'll just sound false and not like a part of the first 2 verses... I'll do my best to get depressed __________________ AMD64 3800+ Dualcore Asus A8N-E Nforce4 Ultra Chipset 2048MB Kingston HyperX Dualchan pc3200 Ram Asus 7800GTX PCI-E 16x Graphicscard

Oct 18, 2004, 05:21 PM	#5
classic_leon HardwareHeaven Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Wu Han, Hu Bei, P.R.China Posts: 1,238 Rep Power: 0	Yeah, good. no people=no emotion; more people=much emotion. __________________ Fashion keeps us alive. YouP-PAX Please visit http://www.A-PAX.co.uk to discuss the computer mods. The latest YouP PAX modded drivers are provided on the site.

Oct 21, 2004, 02:33 AM	#7
MythicaL I like computers. Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: In front of a monitor Posts: 3,399 Rep Power: 89 System Specs	Cool... sounds like it could be made into a good Tool song __________________ Always knew I didn't belong in this world. I wasn't made for this. But I'll never forget those who betrayed me, and those who never failed my trust.

Oct 18, 2004, 05:47 AM	#3
Drakon DriverHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Floatin'... Posts: 4,957 Rep Power: 0	i like it so far. u should try and finish it...

Oct 21, 2004, 02:14 AM	#6
Ript_Van_Winkle DriverHeaven Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Malaise Posts: 482 Rep Power: 0	It sounds like a Dr. Seuss rhyme...