wrote this for a girl......#2

TJ- · Oct 29, 2004, 07:38 AM

so u say u wanted me to post more... here is a short one....,, was for the same chick

verity--

to know that you smile more is worth unlimited funds,

to know i had a part of it, makes me feel like life has just begun,

to know there is new life to your heart,

means that this is just the start,

its unlike me to give up so much,

but to know i make you happy, helps us keep in touch,

for you are special in every way,

and to see those two words you sent me,

lets me know that this is worth all of my days,

the verity of these words, need not be doubted,

for you are the goddess, in which i belive,

that there is a future between you and me,

TJ- · Oct 29, 2004, 07:40 AM

cheesy i know,,,, but hey it works....!!

Nicky-chan · Oct 29, 2004, 07:52 AM

Nicly done cept the first line. Take out funds and replace it with happyness if this is actualy gunna be given to a girl.

Callandor · Oct 29, 2004, 03:06 PM

*quickly presses ctrl+a & ctrl+c's into antoher doc. *

hey, im rubbish at this kinda stuff, thnx man

halocarbon · Nov 10, 2004, 01:27 PM

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Originally Posted by sun_walka

*quickly presses ctrl+a & ctrl+c's into antoher doc. *

hey, im rubbish at this kinda stuff, thnx man

[COLOR=DarkOrange]then never come here, any way what are you????????? [/COLOR]

Callandor · Nov 10, 2004, 05:03 PM

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Originally Posted by halocarbon

[color=darkorange]then never come here, any way what are you????????? [/color]

I'm a cross between an elf, a reindeer and three frogs (of different species)

YAYitsAndrew · Nov 10, 2004, 08:12 PM

Don't force a rhyme. Poems don't have to rhyme

Drakon · Nov 10, 2004, 08:54 PM

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Originally Posted by YAYitsAndrew

Don't force a rhyme. Poems don't have to rhyme

that's true...

Oct 29, 2004, 07:38 AM	#1
TJ- DriverHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Infinity Posts: 3,679 Rep Power: 0	wrote this for a girl......#2 so u say u wanted me to post more... here is a short one....,, was for the same chick verity-- to know that you smile more is worth unlimited funds, to know i had a part of it, makes me feel like life has just begun, to know there is new life to your heart, means that this is just the start, its unlike me to give up so much, but to know i make you happy, helps us keep in touch, for you are special in every way, and to see those two words you sent me, lets me know that this is worth all of my days, the verity of these words, need not be doubted, for you are the goddess, in which i belive, that there is a future between you and me,

Oct 29, 2004, 07:52 AM	#3
Nicky-chan formally Elclair Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Arizona,Pheonix Posts: 360 Rep Power: 0	Nicly done cept the first line. Take out funds and replace it with happyness if this is actualy gunna be given to a girl. __________________

Oct 29, 2004, 03:06 PM	#4
Callandor Forged on Dragonmount Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada Posts: 7,237 Rep Power: 304 System Specs	quickly presses ctrl+a & ctrl+c's into antoher doc. hey, im rubbish at this kinda stuff, thnx man __________________

Nov 10, 2004, 08:12 PM	#7
YAYitsAndrew Anti-Piracy Poster Boy Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: NJ Posts: 2,605 Rep Power: 79 System Specs	Don't force a rhyme. Poems don't have to rhyme __________________ "It is because the resistance to paying for copyrighted material, although often characterized as arising from a supposed technical burden or principled concern for the public interest, arises rather from exactly the same segment of the brain that is dominant in shoplifters." - Mark Helprin, Digital Barbarism In other words, it's never okay to steal even if you think you have a good reason! www.yayitsandrew.com

Oct 29, 2004, 07:40 AM	Thread Starter #2
TJ- DriverHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Infinity Posts: 3,679 Rep Power: 0	cheesy i know,,,, but hey it works....!!