TheOpposition

First time i wrote something for a long while that wasn't somehow related to school. thought i'd post it. And boo to Message board format editing





[color=white]Surrounded again….[/color]
[color=white]Hateful words coming at me, loud and clear[/color]
[color=white]Back to a wall, and feeling the fear[/color]
[color=white]Wanting to slip away, but then…[/color]


[color=white]How could you ignore it…?[/color]

[color=white]I’m not sure about my course of action[/color]
[color=white]Scan the possibilities, anticipate their choices[/color]
[color=white]I know I shouldn’t listen to my voices.[/color]
[color=white]But the walls were falling…[/color]


[color=white]I know what you really want.[/color]


[color=white]I knew this would lead to violence[/color]
[color=white]Words, failed me this time[/color]
[color=white]Well, it’s not like I’ll lose my innocence[/color]
[color=white]If I play it right, it wouldn’t be a crime.[/color]


[color=white]Vengeance is through me![/color]


[color=white]The walls fell[/color]
[color=white]Embracing the hatred, the desire[/color]
[color=white]The need to see their blood, my excitement went higher[/color]
[color=white]My thoughts second to my actions, I lost control, I could tell. [/color]



[color=white]Their blood is now yours.[/color]


[color=white]They are the ones who chose this path[/color]
[color=white]They are the ones who brought about my wrath[/color]
[color=white]They are the ones who let loose my fists of fury[/color]
[color=white]They are about to find out I’m in a fit to bury.[/color]


[color=white]See? I keep my promises.[/color]

[color=white]I didn’t feel the pain[/color]
[color=white]Until the adrenaline washed away[/color]
[color=white]Confused and still feeling abused[/color]
[color=white]Both of them down, their efforts in vain.[/color]


[color=white]See? I protected you.[/color]


[color=white]It’s then I noticed the gash on my knuckle…[/color]
[color=white]It was supposed to be in defense.[/color]
[color=white]The voice chuckled[/color]
[color=white]I couldn’t recompense[/color]


[color=white]They won’t bother you again.[/color]

[color=white]This voice was a curse…[/color]
[color=white]I protected you![/color]
[color=white]I didn’t defend myself...[/color]
[color=white]It’s kill or be killed![/color]
[color=white]I committed murder in the first… [/color]

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"Always code as if the guy who ends up maintaining, or testing your code will be a violent psychopath who knows where you live." -- Captain Cobol --

Drakon

I like it...

Callandor

I think gashed knuckles are cool man. Good stuff.

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solar_flare

gash on my knuckles..................tight.i like the way stuck to the subject of the song,usually guys get of the the topic.....if you know what i mean

kenshi_himora

niiiice.

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TheOpposition

Thanks for the positive responses people. I appreciate it. ^^

Maybe I'll try and write something else ...

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"Always code as if the guy who ends up maintaining, or testing your code will be a violent psychopath who knows where you live." -- Captain Cobol --

riles9262

Please do, that was good!

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