Spectre

Falstaff · Nov 18, 2004, 04:11 AM

Blowing sand, vacant eyes

sinew and burnt bone, the vulture flys

lifeless hands hold the splintered stock of broken gun

his twisted flesh remains after the battle is won.

steel beasts bore him to this place on the dying ground

he fired the weapon and fell where he stood, and made no sound

Gods of war feed till their bellys burst

angels of darkness have come and men have done thier very worst

there is no redemption on the field of battle, and we lose our bodies and our souls.

for the living and the dead, we all know that only the spectre of death truly rules.

Drakon · Nov 18, 2004, 04:14 AM

that was great, jeff...

mainman · Nov 18, 2004, 04:18 AM

That is really beautifull Jeff, amazing writing skills. Very very good work!!

Falstaff · Nov 18, 2004, 05:04 AM

thanx guys, yall give it a try as well

Nov 18, 2004, 04:11 AM	#1
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	Spectre Blowing sand, vacant eyes sinew and burnt bone, the vulture flys lifeless hands hold the splintered stock of broken gun his twisted flesh remains after the battle is won. steel beasts bore him to this place on the dying ground he fired the weapon and fell where he stood, and made no sound Gods of war feed till their bellys burst angels of darkness have come and men have done thier very worst there is no redemption on the field of battle, and we lose our bodies and our souls. for the living and the dead, we all know that only the spectre of death truly rules.

Nov 18, 2004, 04:18 AM	#3
mainman Mr. Nobody Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: OmniPresent Nightwatcher Posts: 5,961 Rep Power: 71	That is really beautifull Jeff, amazing writing skills. Very very good work!! __________________

Nov 18, 2004, 04:14 AM	#2
Drakon DriverHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Floatin'... Posts: 4,957 Rep Power: 0	that was great, jeff...

Nov 18, 2004, 05:04 AM	Thread Starter #4
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	thanx guys, yall give it a try as well