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Join Date: Jan 2005
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Me poems
Poem #1 If you ever came to feel my pain
or drowned for a day in my lonely rain you would know what its like to suffer in my hell if you listened to the tales I have to tell you would never again pass judgement on me you may even understand why sometimes I flee why I sometimes hide when the road gets rough or run away when life gets tough if you spent 60 seconds locked inside my head you'd understand why life I dread if you took a min to feel what I feel you understand that my pain is so real if you for once, choked on my tears or had to fight through my fears if you had to spend a day in my solitude my nightmares you couldnt elude the judgements you first passed would fade away you would probably hit the ground and pray to never again see the things that I've seen to never experience the dreams that i dream
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[color=lime] [/color] [color=lime]"People are strange when they are strangers"[/color] [color=#00ff00]"I won't let this build up inside of me"[/color] [color=#00ff00]"I love you,I hate you,I can't live with out you"[/color]
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Old Codger
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I like it..
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DriverHeaven Extreme Member
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not bad but to commercial..the way it rhymes...if you know what i mean
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悪魔の方法
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Not bad, man.
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