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Portrait of a Man
[color=white]Lonely[/color]
[color=white]He sits at the window[/color] [color=white]Staring out into the cold abyss[/color] [color=white]Feeling the same way the world feels for him[/color] [color=white]Nothing…[/color] [color=white]Scared[/color] [color=white]Chances, risks; they terrify him[/color] [color=white]The fear of taking one[/color] [color=white]And being disappointed in the end[/color] [color=white]The unpredictable outcome[/color] [color=white]Anger[/color] [color=white]A silent, deadly, hideous beast[/color] [color=white]Lurking deep inside him[/color] [color=white]Bound and gagged over the years[/color] [color=white]By its master who’s nervous to release it[/color] [color=white]Sadness and Pain[/color] [color=white]Constant feelings[/color] [color=white]Heavy burdens he has to bear[/color] [color=white]They never leave him[/color] [color=white]Lifelong companions[/color] [color=white]Longing[/color] [color=white]Longing to be held tightly[/color] [color=white]Loved and cherished by someone[/color] [color=white]As much as he feels the same for them[/color] [color=white]No longer feeling alone[/color] [color=white]Hope, Happiness, Serenity, Friendship, LOVE[/color] [color=white]These are the things that push him…[/color] [color=white]Push him to carry on everyday[/color] [color=white]Into the cruel world of the unknown[/color] [color=#ffffff]____________________________________________[/color] I wrote this after watching Good Will Hunting earlier today. I guess it's a description of the emotions i've been dealing with lately. comments are welcome, as usual...
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this is good man....very good
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it came spilling out right after i watched the movie. had to get it on paper quickly...
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very nice, as i stated before.
You should look for a story called "The Circular Ruins" next time your in an old bookstore...you'd like it |
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i'll keep an eye out for it, PJ
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