Mental Chains

Drakon · Feb 13, 2005, 07:40 AM

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[color=red]Invisible, they bound me[/color]

[color=red]Wrapped tightly, they prevent[/color]

[color=red]This youthful soul from being free[/color]

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[color=red]Heavy burdens I have to bear[/color]

[color=red]They are the jewelry that I wear[/color]

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[color=red]For these chains make me feel[/color]

[color=red]That I’m nothing but a rock in a stream[/color]

[color=red]As my life flows quickly by[/color]

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[color=red]Day by day I struggle to break free [/color]

[color=red]From these evil devices fate has set on me[/color]

[color=red]For they prevent me from being[/color]

[color=red]The man I want to be[/color]

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[color=red]Slowly I tire and weaken[/color]

[color=red]For another day this soul they have beaten[/color]

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[color=red]And so to the God above I pray[/color]

[color=red]As I long dearly for the day[/color]

[color=red]To break these mental chains of mine[/color]

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Feels like it needs some more work. Maybe changing some lines or adding a few more. Dunno...

Falstaff · Feb 13, 2005, 08:38 AM

drakon....it is so hard to read the white text..can you change the color?

Drakon · Feb 13, 2005, 08:54 AM

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Originally Posted by fallang_jeff

drakon....it is so hard to read the white text..can you change the color?

[color=white]changed it, jeff. btw, howcome it's hard for u to view it? it seems fine on my monitor...[/color]

Falstaff · Feb 13, 2005, 10:08 AM

its the theme I suppose..that is probably it...using the new theme. It reminds me of wildchilds site.

Drakon · Feb 13, 2005, 04:06 PM

oh, that might be the problem. is the color i picked fine to read?

Feb 13, 2005, 07:40 AM	#1
Drakon DriverHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Floatin'... Posts: 4,957 Rep Power: 0	Mental Chains [color=white][color=white][/color][/color] [color=red]Invisible, they bound me[/color] [color=red]Wrapped tightly, they prevent[/color] [color=red]This youthful soul from being free[/color] [color=red][/color] [color=red][/color] [color=red]Heavy burdens I have to bear[/color] [color=red]They are the jewelry that I wear[/color] [color=red][/color] [color=red][/color] [color=red]For these chains make me feel[/color] [color=red]That I’m nothing but a rock in a stream[/color] [color=red]As my life flows quickly by[/color] [color=red][/color] [color=red][/color] [color=red]Day by day I struggle to break free [/color] [color=red]From these evil devices fate has set on me[/color] [color=red]For they prevent me from being[/color] [color=red]The man I want to be[/color] [color=red][/color] [color=red][/color] [color=red]Slowly I tire and weaken[/color] [color=red]For another day this soul they have beaten[/color] [color=red][/color] [color=red][/color] [color=red]And so to the God above I pray[/color] [color=red]As I long dearly for the day[/color] [color=red]To break these mental chains of mine[/color] [color=red]_____________________________________[/color] Feels like it needs some more work. Maybe changing some lines or adding a few more. Dunno... Last edited by Drakon; Feb 13, 2005 at 08:54 AM.

Feb 13, 2005, 08:38 AM	#2
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	drakon....it is so hard to read the white text..can you change the color? __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Feb 13, 2005, 10:08 AM	#4
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	its the theme I suppose..that is probably it...using the new theme. It reminds me of wildchilds site. __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Feb 13, 2005, 04:06 PM	Thread Starter #5
Drakon DriverHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Floatin'... Posts: 4,957 Rep Power: 0	oh, that might be the problem. is the color i picked fine to read?