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Mental Chains
[color=white][color=white] [color=red]Invisible, they bound me[/color] [color=red]Wrapped tightly, they prevent[/color] [color=red]This youthful soul from being free[/color] [color=red][/color][color=red][/color] [color=red]Heavy burdens I have to bear[/color] [color=red]They are the jewelry that I wear[/color] [color=red][/color][color=red][/color] [color=red]For these chains make me feel[/color] [color=red]That I’m nothing but a rock in a stream[/color] [color=red]As my life flows quickly by[/color] [color=red][/color][color=red][/color] [color=red]Day by day I struggle to break free [/color] [color=red]From these evil devices fate has set on me[/color] [color=red]For they prevent me from being[/color] [color=red]The man I want to be[/color] [color=red][/color][color=red][/color] [color=red]Slowly I tire and weaken[/color] [color=red]For another day this soul they have beaten[/color] [color=red][/color][color=red][/color] [color=red]And so to the God above I pray[/color] [color=red]As I long dearly for the day[/color] [color=red]To break these mental chains of mine[/color] [color=red]_____________________________________[/color] Feels like it needs some more work. Maybe changing some lines or adding a few more. Dunno... Last edited by Drakon; Feb 13, 2005 at 08:54 AM. |
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drakon....it is so hard to read the white text..can you change the color?
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Last edited by Drakon; Feb 13, 2005 at 04:05 PM. |
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its the theme I suppose..that is probably it...using the new theme. It reminds me of wildchilds site.
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oh, that might be the problem. is the color i picked fine to read?
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