keep walking (never give up)

Falstaff · Mar 2, 2005, 07:41 AM

Walk past the river with no name,
wash your guilty hands in the dark waters and pray.

you swallowed fear and swallowed pain
stood fast against howling banshees
and lived another day.

beyond your mind, beyond your heart
you struggle with the prospects of tommorow, with your own pride

unravelling and torn your mind is coming apart.
a tiny whisper becomes a deafening howl, as you battle your demons inside.

Walk past the faceless and unforgiven faces awaiting a certain fate
crushed by guilt and burned by time.

face the beasts of iniquity, strike hard and fast now, in the back of the creature that will not wait.

the demon clings to the shadows in your soul, and waits for you to sleep, to reap havoc in your heart and in your mind.

--jeff fallang--

riles9262 · Mar 3, 2005, 09:44 PM

B-e-a-utiful!

Falstaff · Mar 4, 2005, 03:37 AM

thanx riles

nitrousoxide52 · Mar 4, 2005, 03:48 AM

Awsome! I needed one of these

Drakon · Mar 4, 2005, 05:35 AM

very nice, jeff

Falstaff · Mar 4, 2005, 07:07 AM

your welcome drake opolis
you still modding the poetry forum at the other site Drakon?

Drakon · Mar 4, 2005, 08:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fallang_jeff

your welcome drake opolis
you still modding the poetry forum at the other site Drakon?

I guess... I dunno

Falstaff · Mar 4, 2005, 09:10 AM

maybe Zardon will let ya mod here in echos?

Drakon · Mar 4, 2005, 06:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fallang_jeff

maybe Zardon will let ya mod here in echos?

Dunno Jeff. Why don't use ask him?

mainman · Mar 6, 2005, 04:14 AM

Beautiful meanful writing as allways Jeff.

Mar 2, 2005, 07:41 AM	#1
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,047 Rep Power: 206	keep walking (never give up) Walk past the river with no name, wash your guilty hands in the dark waters and pray. you swallowed fear and swallowed pain stood fast against howling banshees and lived another day. beyond your mind, beyond your heart you struggle with the prospects of tommorow, with your own pride unravelling and torn your mind is coming apart. a tiny whisper becomes a deafening howl, as you battle your demons inside. Walk past the faceless and unforgiven faces awaiting a certain fate crushed by guilt and burned by time. face the beasts of iniquity, strike hard and fast now, in the back of the creature that will not wait. the demon clings to the shadows in your soul, and waits for you to sleep, to reap havoc in your heart and in your mind. --jeff fallang-- __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor." Last edited by fallang_jeff; Mar 2, 2005 at 09:13 AM.

Mar 3, 2005, 09:44 PM	#2
riles9262 Driverheaven brewmaster Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: British Columbia, Canada Posts: 4,842 Rep Power: 70 System Specs	B-e-a-utiful! __________________ A beer a day keeps the doctor away.

Mar 4, 2005, 03:37 AM	Thread Starter #3
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,047 Rep Power: 206	thanx riles __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Mar 4, 2005, 03:48 AM	#4
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Mar 4, 2005, 07:07 AM	Thread Starter #6
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,047 Rep Power: 206	your welcome drake opolis you still modding the poetry forum at the other site Drakon? __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Mar 4, 2005, 05:35 AM	#5
Drakon DriverHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Floatin'... Posts: 4,957 Rep Power: 56	very nice, jeff

Mar 4, 2005, 09:10 AM	Thread Starter #8
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,047 Rep Power: 206	maybe Zardon will let ya mod here in echos? __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Mar 6, 2005, 04:14 AM	#10
mainman Mr. Nobody Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: OmniPresent Nightwatcher Posts: 5,961 Rep Power: 69	Beautiful meanful writing as allways Jeff. __________________