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Old Codger
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My old face..
As a boy I yearned for the sanctuary of a warm embrace
a tender kiss, a soft hand and a pretty face. becoming a man I sought the ample bosum and a temple of pure chastity to bear my children, mantle them from the cold and all adversity As a traveller I sought the flavors of women and their sweetness remains today from the folds of the silk sheets in their chambers I learned to love and play my temples are gray and the world has changed and I recall what I regret for all the endeavors and futile pursuits it is love that I have not found yet. I have nothing to give but savor the tenderness and the warm embrace. of the children and grandchildren that wait for my smile...and plant kisses upon my old face.
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Last edited by fallang_jeff; Mar 16, 2005 at 12:59 AM. |
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HardwareHeaven Senior Member
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very beautiful, definately takes the reader on a short journey
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thankyou kindly
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DriverHeaven Junior Member
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very nice, I like it.
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what's that...........its CAR-BON....hah
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DriverHeaven Extreme Member
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nice work, jeff
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thanx Drakon...feelin melancholy
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