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Gates of Hell
first steps into a world without remorse
my life my path and my chosen course beyond the warmth of mothers embrace into the cold wind with the rain upon my face. defenseless, naive and alone I stood embrace the devil and forsake the good. I forged my armour and learned to wait for weaknesses and oppurtunity I calculate and struck when the belly and the neck revealled the last few moments were cut from their throats as they kneeled. my only purpose is to serve and obey I bear my sword for honor and live another day. The only master I could ever truly serve is the beast within and I have observed. My heart is cold and hard as steel My body is strong and I wait for them to kneel. My body is a shell and it serves me well... I shall never know heaven and I guard the gates of hell...
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DriverHeaven Junior Member
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Amazing, I absolutely love it, did you write it?
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yes, just a moment of inspiration..
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Jeff is really a very talented artist, its allways a pleasure to read your inspired words my wise old friend.
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thanx...
perhaps the creative impulses are fueled by my darker side..
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Yes..the dark side of the force is strong my son...
On a more serious note, it's really amazing how one men's word can be so powerful in another men's life. Keep pushing your dark and bright side, inspiration is a powerful tool. Btw, NO, thank you Jeff.
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very nice, jeff
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thanx Drakonious Maximus..
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Nice one jeff; it's one of my favs so far.
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thanx riles
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Yeah Man I have to Agree thats Some Great Stuff.
Love the title too.
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