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DriverHeaven Newbie
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Transitions Time passes at a glance. Others watch as you make haste. Here many have fallen; this is your chance. Clutching deep within I shall not be erased. Someone has mistakenly lost guidance. Black sky’s hold back a brilliant light. Brittle has the ground become it has lost all subsidence. Changing tides of fate my soul has given fight! A journey which has yet to be completed. Often the will is left to wither and die I would hold my ground; I would not be defeated. I will lay this beast to rest; it is here it will forever lye! Taken from me was my thirst for life. Echoing solace has taken flight. Quenching this water is; so ends this strife. With wings of a butterfly I disappear into the night. ________________________ VULGER
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Your writing reminds me of another fellow that wrote as well, a Phil Lynott, he inspired me a great deal, but then he is gone now....quite a bass player too..
good work
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