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autumn poem
[color=yellow]In haste she bore only her desire
to stand before him at the fire[/color] [color=yellow]glowing red her body warmed by the flame from anticipation, only his lust remained[/color] [color=yellow]Sabine maiden with emerald eyes subdued the warrior with naked thighs[/color] [color=yellow]through her garden he knows he must bury his sword with one deep thrust[/color] [color=yellow]rapture and joy their body intertwined visions of heaven fill their minds[/color] [color=yellow]till the fire grows colder and the coming light reveal the lovers on this autumn night[/color]
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thats pretty good. Made me think dirty thoughts (intentionally i presume). Different, but good. Nice one falstaff.
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thanx...
I am not always such a randy bloke...but I like the angst of youth...the energy...it is the only gift we truly should enjoy..
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You don't have to tell this college kid, angst and energy is what we strive on
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