Oil city vignette

Falstaff · May 19, 2004, 06:01 AM

[COLOR=darkblue]Breathe deep the gathering gloom,
Watch lights fade from every room.
Bedsitter people look back and lament,
Another day's useless energy spent.
Impassioned lovers wrestle as one,
Lonely man cries for love and has none.
New mother picks up and suckles her son,
Senior citizens wish they were young.
Cold hearted orb that rules the night,
Removes the colours from our sight.
Red is grey and yellow white,
But we decide which is right.
And which is an illusion???[/COLOR]

Dom · May 19, 2004, 06:03 AM

Eerie.

Falstaff · May 19, 2004, 06:12 AM

yes frank, it was eerie...

fireball · May 19, 2004, 08:22 PM

Nice

GutterPunk · May 20, 2004, 10:32 PM

very cool nice setting... seems like you should have written a poem, or a little story to go with it

May 19, 2004, 06:01 AM	#1
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	Oil city vignette [COLOR=darkblue]Breathe deep the gathering gloom, Watch lights fade from every room. Bedsitter people look back and lament, Another day's useless energy spent. Impassioned lovers wrestle as one, Lonely man cries for love and has none. New mother picks up and suckles her son, Senior citizens wish they were young. Cold hearted orb that rules the night, Removes the colours from our sight. Red is grey and yellow white, But we decide which is right. And which is an illusion???[/COLOR] __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor." Last edited by fallang_jeff; May 21, 2004 at 12:04 AM.

May 19, 2004, 06:12 AM	Thread Starter #3
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	yes frank, it was eerie... __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

May 19, 2004, 08:22 PM	#4
fireball HardwareHeaven Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 2,899 Rep Power: 0	Nice __________________ [color=gray][/color]

May 20, 2004, 10:32 PM	#5
GutterPunk I = Greatest Dood Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Nebraska Posts: 5,949 Rep Power: 71	very cool nice setting... seems like you should have written a poem, or a little story to go with it __________________ Rock On \m/ Thank you Mousey for the Sig! --------------- Intel Core2Duo E6660 (3.4GHZ) ~ Tuniq Tower 120 ~ Enermax Galaxy 1000W ~ Corsair Dominator @ 1090MHZ 5-5-5-15 (OCZ XTC Modded Cooler)~ EVGA 8800GTX W/ HR-03 Plus 120MM ~ Asus DVD-RW LiteScribe ~ LG DVD-RW ~ Corsair Voyager 2GB ReadyBoost Drive ~ Vantec Nexus Fan Controller ~ ThermalTake Armor 25CM fan ~ Personal Finance Blog: Dent Your Debt

May 19, 2004, 06:03 AM	#2
Dom DriverHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 12,940 Rep Power: 0	Eerie.