Hungry Eyes

dominatrixxx · Feb 19, 2005, 06:07 AM

That is the title to one of my favorites...rendered in graphic pencils on medium tooth art paper.
I just wanted to air it out, so to speak...get some fresh opinions on it. Let me know what you think.
I may post other pieces that I have done, later on...who knows?

Drakon · Feb 19, 2005, 06:16 AM

looks pretty good to me. the eyes are quite piercing i think

Dark Lord · Feb 19, 2005, 06:21 AM

not bad, hell of alot better then i could ever do.

the only thing thats not too cool is his... snout? noes? upper jaw? im not exactly sure what you would call that hole grouping.

i think i know what kind of angle you were going for when you drew this, but your orientation was off. what it looks like is that hes looking head on at you, but his snout is severly broken and being forced to his right.

im going to guess that this is what you were going for when you made it.

just some constuctive criticism is all, no more, no less.

Feb 19, 2005, 06:07 AM	#1
dominatrixxx DriverHeaven Newbie Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 12 Rep Power: 0	Hungry Eyes That is the title to one of my favorites...rendered in graphic pencils on medium tooth art paper. I just wanted to air it out, so to speak...get some fresh opinions on it. Let me know what you think. I may post other pieces that I have done, later on...who knows? __________________ [color=red]To identify your pain..would be my pleasure[/color]

Feb 19, 2005, 06:16 AM	#2
Drakon DriverHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Floatin'... Posts: 4,957 Rep Power: 0	looks pretty good to me. the eyes are quite piercing i think

Feb 19, 2005, 06:21 AM	#3
Dark Lord HardwareHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Grand Rapids, MI Posts: 5,945 Rep Power: 125 System Specs	not bad, hell of alot better then i could ever do. the only thing thats not too cool is his... snout? noes? upper jaw? im not exactly sure what you would call that hole grouping. i think i know what kind of angle you were going for when you drew this, but your orientation was off. what it looks like is that hes looking head on at you, but his snout is severly broken and being forced to his right. im going to guess that this is what you were going for when you made it. just some constuctive criticism is all, no more, no less.