Barren

~~torrobinson~~ · Jun 5, 2005, 08:13 AM

http://driverheavenuploads.co.uk/Torrobinson/barren.jpg
Warning: 3.59 MB

Again: NEED COMMENTS before I submit, BECAUSE I KNOW IT SUCKS ASS!

TJ- · Jun 5, 2005, 08:22 AM

very nice, but... the ice or mountains at the bottom look plain...

mabye add a orange/reddish small planet in the top right to break up the black sky...

also the line between the ground and the sky (on the left) looks grainy

Falstaff · Jun 5, 2005, 09:17 AM

Love it!!

fireball · Jun 5, 2005, 09:19 AM

Nice.

swatX · Jun 5, 2005, 10:29 AM

even though you type some pathetic flames , i must admit ; you do have excellent photoshop skills..

nice job

Bruuce · Jun 5, 2005, 12:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by [zi0n]aXe

very nice, but... the ice or mountains at the bottom look plain...

mabye add a orange/reddish small planet in the top right to break up the black sky...

also the line between the ground and the sky (on the left) looks grainy

I agree. The surface looks too smooth. Other than that, looks pretty cool.

~~torrobinson~~ · Jun 5, 2005, 06:59 PM

lol, swatX, thanks.
Yeah, I see how the "barren" land is too plain, so I am adding a texture to it as an overlay (only not as bright and visible). (http://www.sethwhite.org/images/dry%...ggler/soil.jpg)
Hope that will look better.
I am wondering: Should I add a planet in the upper-right of the image, add a planet colliding with the largeer planet-cauing a shockwave, or both?

" also the line between the ground and the sky (on the left) looks grainy"
-I think I see what you mean. I will fix that.

Thanks for the comments.

~~torrobinson~~ · Jun 5, 2005, 08:02 PM

Ok, please check back at http://driverheavenuploads.co.uk/Torrobinson/barren.jpg
I added another planet, and attempted a texture, although its looks like SHIT.

IO still need comments. Although the texture is sadly past the point of no return. Editing or removing the texture will be almost impossible...

What I will change/edit:
-stars are ON TOP of the smaller planet for some reason. I will remove these, but only after I am sure I want it there, as part of the stars layer will be deleted.

-I am unsure about the flare-thingy from the sun..... dammit

Bruuce · Jun 5, 2005, 09:21 PM

That looks great man. I think you should submit it.

swatX · Jun 5, 2005, 09:31 PM

yea it looks good..

Asmoday · Jun 5, 2005, 09:39 PM

I like it! Good job.

~~torrobinson~~ · Jun 5, 2005, 10:53 PM

Thx!

Jun 5, 2005, 08:13 AM	#1
~~torrobinson~~ Banned Join Date: May 2005 Location: Sherwood Park, Alberta Posts: 173 Rep Power: 0	Barren http://driverheavenuploads.co.uk/Torrobinson/barren.jpg Warning: 3.59 MB Again: NEED COMMENTS before I submit, BECAUSE I KNOW IT SUCKS ASS!

Jun 5, 2005, 08:22 AM	#2
TJ- DriverHeaven Extreme Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Infinity Posts: 3,679 Rep Power: 0	very nice, but... the ice or mountains at the bottom look plain... mabye add a orange/reddish small planet in the top right to break up the black sky... also the line between the ground and the sky (on the left) looks grainy __________________ new sig comming soon

Jun 5, 2005, 09:17 AM	#3
Falstaff Old Codger Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USAFA Posts: 19,048 Rep Power: 207	Love it!! __________________ "Inspiration is always a surprising visitor."

Jun 5, 2005, 09:19 AM	#4
fireball HardwareHeaven Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 2,899 Rep Power: 0	Nice. __________________ [color=gray][/color]

Jun 5, 2005, 10:29 AM	#5
swatX ba\|\\|\\|ed Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 618 Rep Power: 0	even though you type some pathetic flames , i must admit ; you do have excellent photoshop skills.. nice job __________________ thx stick for the sig

Jun 5, 2005, 06:59 PM	Thread Starter #7
~~torrobinson~~ Banned Join Date: May 2005 Location: Sherwood Park, Alberta Posts: 173 Rep Power: 0	lol, swatX, thanks. Yeah, I see how the "barren" land is too plain, so I am adding a texture to it as an overlay (only not as bright and visible). (http://www.sethwhite.org/images/dry%...ggler/soil.jpg) Hope that will look better. I am wondering: Should I add a planet in the upper-right of the image, add a planet colliding with the largeer planet-cauing a shockwave, or both? " also the line between the ground and the sky (on the left) looks grainy" -I think I see what you mean. I will fix that. Thanks for the comments.

Jun 5, 2005, 08:02 PM	Thread Starter #8
~~torrobinson~~ Banned Join Date: May 2005 Location: Sherwood Park, Alberta Posts: 173 Rep Power: 0	Ok, please check back at http://driverheavenuploads.co.uk/Torrobinson/barren.jpg I added another planet, and attempted a texture, although its looks like SHIT. IO still need comments. Although the texture is sadly past the point of no return. Editing or removing the texture will be almost impossible... What I will change/edit: -stars are ON TOP of the smaller planet for some reason. I will remove these, but only after I am sure I want it there, as part of the stars layer will be deleted. -I am unsure about the flare-thingy from the sun..... dammit

Jun 5, 2005, 09:21 PM	#9
Bruuce DriverHeaven Winner Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 293 Rep Power: 0	That looks great man. I think you should submit it. __________________

Jun 5, 2005, 09:31 PM	#10
swatX ba\|\\|\\|ed Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 618 Rep Power: 0	yea it looks good.. __________________ thx stick for the sig

Jun 5, 2005, 09:39 PM	#11
Asmoday Demonic Join Date: May 2002 Location: In the cold, dark north... Posts: 5,198 Rep Power: 92 System Specs	I like it! Good job. __________________ How You can help Hardwareheaven by using Digg

Jun 5, 2005, 10:53 PM	Thread Starter #12
~~torrobinson~~ Banned Join Date: May 2005 Location: Sherwood Park, Alberta Posts: 173 Rep Power: 0	Thx!