Your opinion is needed

stamvas · Dec 20, 2003, 12:27 AM

Hello here is a demo song I just did. It is composed with Reason2 and of course kx. I know there are a few things in this piece of music, like levels, that need to be edited. But I need everyone's opinion it's one of my first works. (The first edition is not available any more, the link leads to the new edition)

here it is:
MMooMM - Today 03/01/2004

And this is my site I'm just building:
MMooMM Project

Thanks in advance for every reply.

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03/01/2004
the new edition of "Today D in A"

Doug W · Dec 21, 2003, 10:32 PM

Personally I would take the crashes out of the beginning and leave just the keyboard starting things out. The crashing stuff seems out of place to me in the beginning of the piece.

As I was listening to it I got the feeling that it was like background music for a movie, then I clicked on your site link and see your site is about Music and Movies. Is that what you had in mind with this piece?

Nice work-keep plugging.

Doug

~~BMG_Cya=-~~ · Dec 22, 2003, 09:53 AM

Are many of these pieces I've listened to in this forum played with an instrument, or is it resampled
tracks, or....just computer wizzardry? Some are quite good.

Daniel Drummond · Dec 22, 2003, 02:38 PM

BMG, most are original compositions. Some are played with "real" instruments and some use Vst instruments. Stamvas, nice stereo effects but I agree Doug... The crashing stuff sounds bad. Also, you could use a better piano sound. Unless that was the sound you were trying to achieve...

stamvas · Dec 23, 2003, 03:36 PM

Thank you guys for the good words and the possitive comments. The fact is that this track was inspired constructed and recorded within 48 hours and yes the picture in my mind while jamming was a movie backround "vision".
You're right that the crash thing was a bit annoying, even to my ears as well.
The piano sound I used is quite good but the thing is geting wrong with the feeling and the velocity that is kinda mechanic (not human).
As for the organs listened, none of them are real, they are just sampled ones. (Reason)

Anyway thanks again. I think I'll wipe the crash.

Dec 20, 2003, 12:27 AM	#1
stamvas me-myself & I Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Here Posts: 116 Rep Power: 0	Check again (refreshed) Hello here is a demo song I just did. It is composed with Reason2 and of course kx. I know there are a few things in this piece of music, like levels, that need to be edited. But I need everyone's opinion it's one of my first works. (The first edition is not available any more, the link leads to the new edition) here it is: MMooMM - Today 03/01/2004 And this is my site I'm just building: MMooMM Project Thanks in advance for every reply. ---------- 03/01/2004 the new edition of "Today D in A" Last edited by stamvas; Jan 3, 2004 at 11:10 PM.

Dec 22, 2003, 02:38 PM	#4
Daniel Drummond DriverHeaven Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Brazil Posts: 1,137 Rep Power: 0	BMG, most are original compositions. Some are played with "real" instruments and some use Vst instruments. Stamvas, nice stereo effects but I agree Doug... The crashing stuff sounds bad. Also, you could use a better piano sound. Unless that was the sound you were trying to achieve... __________________ www.palcomp3.com.br/ed

Dec 23, 2003, 03:36 PM	Thread Starter #5
stamvas me-myself & I Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Here Posts: 116 Rep Power: 0	Thanks! Thank you guys for the good words and the possitive comments. The fact is that this track was inspired constructed and recorded within 48 hours and yes the picture in my mind while jamming was a movie backround "vision". You're right that the crash thing was a bit annoying, even to my ears as well. The piano sound I used is quite good but the thing is geting wrong with the feeling and the velocity that is kinda mechanic (not human). As for the organs listened, none of them are real, they are just sampled ones. (Reason) Anyway thanks again. I think I'll wipe the crash.

Dec 21, 2003, 10:32 PM	#2
Doug W HardwareHeaven Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Montevideo, MN USA Posts: 973 Rep Power: 0	Personally I would take the crashes out of the beginning and leave just the keyboard starting things out. The crashing stuff seems out of place to me in the beginning of the piece. As I was listening to it I got the feeling that it was like background music for a movie, then I clicked on your site link and see your site is about Music and Movies. Is that what you had in mind with this piece? Nice work-keep plugging. Doug

Dec 22, 2003, 09:53 AM	#3
~~BMG_Cya=-~~ Banned Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: U.S.A. Posts: 718 Rep Power: 0	Are many of these pieces I've listened to in this forum played with an instrument, or is it resampled tracks, or....just computer wizzardry? Some are quite good.