dj_stick

Here's just the intro part to the track i'm working on atm, feel free to leave comments or criticism

WMA9 Format
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jsx[ifl]

to me it sounds like your using "the cliche techno song handbook" to compose this. No offense its put together very well its just the sounds are so...boring? Its like a mix of a drum machine and someone droppin a wet one...i dont wanna be so negative

the second half of the song is really cool tho

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dj_stick

so far its just the intro - which with most hard-trance tracks is generally the same, the bassline in the first part needs to be fixed though, as does the crash imo… but i need the criticism to make sure the track sounds decent at the ned

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Nando Dominguez

Hi Chris, I'm agree with jsx. I like that echo machine sound in the middle of the song. But why don't you try to be more wild/free? It's like nothing happens. I'm sure you have more things to say
Regards
Nando

dj_stick

hey don't be so critical just yet, its only the intro - i have still got the main part of it to go

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TravelRec.

...the first impression is the most important, I think an intro should be a bit more interesting to get all the listeners attention... anyway - nice to hear that you are active on the keys .

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